h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

It took me a fair while to come down

Hi all, The report is on my home page, read it and comment before I pass it on to Shazz for the post.

Thanks P2

Oooh. Is very good!

not bad at all.

Just a couple of tiny things:

Carlisle castle, wander off, and it doesn't seem to like your ' s or something.

Apart from that very good although seems to get off rather lightly

Hi Linus, fixed I thinks added a bit and took your suggestion about . PLease have another look and tell me what you think

Thanks

P2

Platypus - I left a list of (minor) typos attached to the article.

I agree, did get off lightly

But mangnificent as usual .....

Platypus - I left a list of (minor) typos attached to the article.

I agree, did get off lightly

But mangnificent as usual .....

Platypus - I posted a few corrections...but brilliant report!!!!!!

it still says wonder rather than wander. Not that it really matters as it is still very good

Now all i have to do is get Feisor to update your nickname

perhaps that would read better if i said:

Feisor, it is now past the 15th.

Editing is so much easier than writing, all i have to do is sit back and criticise

I'd make comments about how lightly I was let off, but my memory's spotty at best. If I'm to believe my own brain, various people have developed mysterious teleporting powers and just zoom about between places.

Ok Guys, I have fixed the wonder, counted the power puff girls and gave a more prominent role, along with Luke the role-playing housemate. If you thought it was too long or that I ramble too much, you'd let me know, right?P2

That's good...you can't forget 's amazing amounts of after a few drinks.

"I love you!!"

Yes. I tend to EVERYONE after a few drinks...

I think I have worked out what went wrong...

I was silly enough to think like a logical, reasoning Male. If we we're expected to be in Newtown by 2.00pm I assumed that Shrillian would be by to pick me up between 1 and 1.30. (given that we then had to go to Parra to gather Annie and Tashalls, before proceeding to Newtown) - alas Shiriliian was thinking like a thouroughly modern woman, and realised that for a 2pm appointment she should leave home at 1.59...........

So by giving up all hope at 1.55pm, thinking that there is no possible way to be in Newtown by 2, I missed out. Silly me.

Dear Pond, we did miss you Have you picked up Viv yet? There is a report on my page if you want to know what you missed.

My Darling Platypus,

No I HAVE NOT GOT VIV BACK YET !!!!!

sorry for shouting but I am getting really annoyed.


I have read the report, (and refained from making comment on the spelling and grammar) and thankyou I now know what I missed...

*a drunken hmmm... what a sight that must've been*

Hopefully, I have fixed the spelling, the grammar is open for correction, which is why I haven't given it to Shazz and yet so feel free and I have just done some GuideML stuff to it (for the first time-yeay). I'll have another read tomorrow, take in all comments and give to Shazz on Friday, before I go offline for a few days.

Sorry to hear about Viv and I hope you get her back soon.

Awas just,but fun to watch.

Yes well it has been my experience that drunk girls are very

and thank you for your kind thoughts, she will be with me soon.