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Writing Workshop: A582239 - General Intelligence

Post 1

xyroth

Entry: General Intelligence - A582239
Author: xyroth (rash enough to tackle intelligence@A584525) - U149792

the third entry in the first batch.


A582239 - General Intelligence

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

The first sentence of this entry tries to include the complete definition of General Intelligence in a single sentence. I didn't understand it! This is a complex enough question that it deserves to be explained in stages. Break that first sentence up into a few. Be careful using words like 'it' and 'they' because it is not obvious whether they refer to the person or the test.

Further more --> Furthermore


A582239 - General Intelligence

Post 3

xyroth

spelling mistake corrected.

I will have a think about a better way of saying that first sentence.

if you have any suggestion as to a better way of saying it, I will listen.


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