h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello,
I was reading several other responces to your poems, and I have to agree that if YOU like your poems, then they will touch others as well. However, I do think you should concentrate a bit more on the read of your poems. By this I mean read and re-read your poems to yourself, make sure they flow, and portray what you are trying to get across. I personaly write as well. I have had several things published. A key for me is simply to first, like I said, read and re-read for content and flow to your words. Secondly, I definitly suggest a theasuras for any poems, especially those that rhyme. And the last is to really concentrate one your words, those are your only means of communication in writing, choose them wisely. Decriptive, and thoughtful, NO BIG, by any means, simple works too. Just fit the mood of the poem!
In conclusion, I really enjoyed your work. It really exposed your feelings, which is awesome. Try and you will succeed! Good luck, God Bless.
Jenny