A Conversation for Breakshot Billiards,Wellington , Fl, USA
Flea Market: A568235 - Breakshot Billiards,Welington,Fl
Bongod the Confused Started conversation May 29, 2001
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A568235
ok, one of the first from a new rookie...
A568235-Breakshot Billiards,Welington,Fl
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Jun 22, 2001
... Umm, and left uncommented for three weeks, which is another confusing thing around here. Y'know, if there's heavy traffic then postings get stacked above each other and it's hard to keep track of new ones 
This is written in the best HHGTTG style, and I like it 
Nice description of the atmosphere as well 
. But there's still something needed to be added: Does 'Billiards' imply that it's kind of a restaurant (do they have pool tables?), how exactly do we find the place, etc. You get the idea, there's a few of the rather dry facts lacking. I didn't get the PMF bit, must be something to 
I guess. And this being a Guide about reality, I'm afraid the Vogon reference has to go
To sum it up: spend a bit work on it please, it's on the right track!
Bossel (Scout)
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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Aug 3, 2001
Hmmm... It unfortunately looks like the author hasn't been around since initially posting this to PR. I agree with Bossel's comments above, but am thinking that this one will eventually end up in the Writing Workshop - it looks like the author was only on h2g2 for 2 days, and hasn't responded to any postings since then.
Mikey
A568235-Breakshot Billiards,Welington,Fl
Wayfarer -MadForumArtist, Keeper of bad puns, Greeblet with Goo beret, Tangential One Posted Aug 15, 2001
yes, it's too bad. in another 2 weeks it's a candidate for the Flea Market.
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Aug 30, 2001
so, there we go...
A568235-Breakshot Billiards,Welington,Fl
Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! Posted Aug 30, 2001
2nd.
(yes, Bossel, I *am* stalking you....)
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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Posted Aug 30, 2001
I hope so!
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h2g2 auto-messages Posted Aug 31, 2001
Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review' to 'The Flea Market'.
Hi folks,
This entry has been moved to the Flea Market as the author appears to have 'left the building'.
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Flea Market: A568235 - Breakshot Billiards,Welington,Fl
- 1: Bongod the Confused (May 29, 2001)
- 2: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Jun 22, 2001)
- 3: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Aug 3, 2001)
- 4: Wayfarer -MadForumArtist, Keeper of bad puns, Greeblet with Goo beret, Tangential One (Aug 15, 2001)
- 5: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 30, 2001)
- 6: Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide! (Aug 30, 2001)
- 7: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Aug 30, 2001)
- 8: h2g2 auto-messages (Aug 31, 2001)
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