A Conversation for Rain

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Post 41

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Hey, nice smiley - ok

My only comments at this point are:

>>...or filters through the soil back into underground streams, or into artesian wells where it is often pumped...<<
It would be more correct to say 'or filters through the soil back into aquifers where it is often pumped'

and

>>...suggested in around 1947 by Bernard Vonnegut...<<
It would be more correct to say 'a relatively new idea made practical in around 1947 by Bernard Vonnegut'

And now, it would be most correct to say 'Well done sir!' smiley - applause

(btw, It's raining right now and has been for three days, which is unusual since I live in a high desert. It has ranged from, as we say, mere drizzle-drozzle to flat out toad-strangling gully-washer.)

smiley - smileysmiley - oksmiley - cheers


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Post 42

U168592

smiley - ta pail smiley - smiley

I've fixed up those bits, and added some other stuff. smiley - biggrin

(Have also credited you with additional research smiley - ok)

Think I'm happy with it now. It's big innit?! smiley - laugh


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Post 43

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

This is enormous. Stop adding bits to it, you naughty boy! smiley - tongueincheek.

Seriously, though, this is looking really* good. Nice one, Matt smiley - ok


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Post 44

AlexAshman

Entry: Rain - A5527514
Author: Matt (Help the AViators A13264670 fly) - U168592


It was good when you put it in PR, and now it's... er.. bloody good. Don't create a monster...


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Post 45

AlexAshman

Oh and:

Rain you wouldn't wash your uncles Y-fronts in. --> uncle's


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Post 46

U168592

oh! Pants! New I'd missed something...


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Post 47

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


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Looks good smiley - ok

I would not add one more sentence if I were you (unless of course it contained, say, the words 'rubber chicken').

smiley - laugh

smiley - cheers


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Post 48

U168592

*strokes chin thoughtfully*

hmmm.

smiley - eureka

Actually, no. Best not.

smiley - winkeye

smiley - cheers all. smiley - smiley


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Post 49

Wilma Neanderthal

existance -> existence

smiley - run


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Post 50

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)

(I whisper, therefore I exist)

smiley - run


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Post 51

U168592

I shout, therefore I'm allowed!

And I've fixed that up.


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Post 52

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - laugh You two are straight up bonkers, you are!


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Post 53

AlexAshman


Oh, that sounds painful. I wonder how Bonkers feels about it. smiley - erm


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Post 54

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - yikes Alex!!! smiley - hsifsmiley - crosssmiley - fish That was an insinuation!


smiley - tongueout


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Post 55

AlexAshman


I'm sorry - please don't perform the fish-slapping dance on me again smiley - injured


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Post 56

AlexAshman


Speaking of which - a footnote to describe what a rain dance is and who uses it please Matt.


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Post 57

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - hug No more double entendres? smiley - hug

*looks up and down the thread*

Ooops, this is PR, you know!

No playing in PR

...

...

...

smiley - bluelight

smiley - yikes

smiley - run


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Post 58

AlexAshman


Oh no! The fuzz! smiley - run


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Post 59

Skankyrich [?]

I can't believe it - Ashman has turned into Roymondo smiley - yikes

Now, back to the Entry


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Post 60

AlexAshman


*checks height with tape measure*

No I haven't - 'twas just a blip. I'm ok now. smiley - erm


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