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this is an entry I wrote about a band I like, so tell me what you think and any sugestions

Apart from making the reference to [url removed by moderator] be a link to them, I can't think of any changes to suggest.

yeah i wanted that to be a link but I don't think its allowed anymore which is why I put it as i did, if I couldn't have a link than that, I thought, was the next best thing

You might want to mention that the music video for "Fists of Fury" is a parody of Mandonna's "Don't Tell Me".

Or you might not.

that I didn't know, so I've added it, thanks, anything else you can sugest?

Hi SLH,

I'd suggest that you should be quite pleased with yourself.

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