A Conversation for Zwolle, The Netherlands

Flea Market: A529364 - The city of Zwolle, The Netherlands

Post 1

Nussie

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A529364

I wrote a small and nice article about the city in which I was born and raised...


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Post 2

xyroth

Seems to be a very reasonable article.
by the way, what do you think of the three male to male and one female to female LEGAL marriages that took place last night at midnight in amsterdam?


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Post 3

Nussie

Typical for the Dutch to legalize these kinds of things; I don't care to whom someone can marriage, next year someone will probably mary a cow, or his tv-set!


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Post 4

xyroth

Well, someone in america did marry his horse.


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Post 5

Nussie

I, was hesitating, but now I'm really sure the Americans are sickest and the most stupid people on the planet... And we rely on them in the battle against the evil powers in the world?!! O my God, were doomed!!


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Post 6

Frizzychick

And I'm sure I read somewhere that a guy in Australia DID marry his TV!!


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Post 7

Nussie

I've had it! I'll go with the flow and I just proposed to my right hand AND my refrigerator!

you're all invited at the party!


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Post 8

Huw (ACE)

Maybe the entry could do with being a bit longer, incorporating some details about places of interest or something, but other than that it looks good to me smiley - ok


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Post 9

xyroth

I agree with huw, it is nice as it is, but being a little longer would make it even better.


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Post 10

Beeblefish

Me too .. nice article .. but it needs a tiny bit more .. the names or the few nice bars for example .. just a few .. specifics .. so that if I was at teh border of your town I wouldnt be left saying .. "now what?" Give me a few things to do smiley - smiley

~Beeblefish


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Post 11

Swiv (decrepit postgrad)

Me too, I'd like to see a few more details, about specific good and bad bars/hotels/so on
but it's a nice start


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Post 12

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hey, Nussie! How's this one coming along?

smiley - smiley
Mikey


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Post 13

Nussie

sorry; hadn't had the time to work on both of the entries that haven't made the Guide yet... I'm afraid I can't work on them for a couple of months...


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Post 14

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

A couple of months you say? Then I'd say that it's best to move this thread to the Workshop for the meantime.

Seconding, anyone?


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Post 15

Swiv (decrepit postgrad)

I'll second that
I hope Nussie finds time to come back and finish it


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Post 16

h2g2 auto-messages

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review' to 'The Writing Workshop'.


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Post 17

h2g2 auto-messages

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'The Writing Workshop' to 'The Flea Market'.

...as the author of this entry seems to have 'left the building'.


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Post 18

U168592

smiley - book VERY tempting...smiley - erm


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Post 19

U168592

Now in PR here: F48874?thread=2328388 smiley - ok


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