A Conversation for Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK
A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK
Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese Started conversation Apr 13, 2001
Just the right stuff for the Guide!
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A525250
The author is Arhuaine at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/U95228
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Huw (ACE) Posted Apr 13, 2001
That's actually a pretty nice entry! I can't see anything wrong with it at all - I'm sure it will be recommended soon
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Martin Harper Posted Apr 14, 2001
Excellent stuff!
one nitpick: your footnotes are like "C. Street: blah blah" - typically the guide tends to be more like: "C. Street is a blah blah blah" - so the footnotes are sentences. But the sub-eds will change that if you don't, so have no fear...
I really like the structure of this entry - it's nice and simple, and it makes the whole entry hang together and be part of a coherent whole. You tell an interesting story, and make a subject which could have dragged really interesting - touching on the general history and showing how it effected the mill.
My compliments to Arhuaine - and to Bossel for spotting this entry in the workshop.
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Doltaghey House Posted Apr 18, 2001
As the author of this entry I just want to thank Bossel for submitting it on my behalf. The corrctions for the footnotes are no problem, I can do those myself. I'm glad people like this entry. I thought it was a bit on the dry side. But I'm fond of the place because I work there, and doing the research was fun.
A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK
Huw (ACE) Posted Apr 18, 2001
Hey, no problem - this is our Guide, so write about whatever you like!
Congrats again on this entry, it's good! Come on, scouts, pick it
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Doltaghey House Posted Apr 18, 2001
Quick note... the corrections to the footnotes are done.
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Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni' Posted Apr 19, 2001
Congratulations! I put forward your entry for inclusion into the Edited Guide and it was accepted! Well done!
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Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni' Posted Apr 19, 2001
"Thanks for your recommendation. You'll be glad to know that we think this
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Congratulations!
h2g2 auto-messages Posted Apr 19, 2001
Editorial Note: This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review forum because this entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.
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A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK
- 1: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Apr 13, 2001)
- 2: Huw (ACE) (Apr 13, 2001)
- 3: Martin Harper (Apr 14, 2001)
- 4: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Apr 16, 2001)
- 5: Doltaghey House (Apr 18, 2001)
- 6: Huw (ACE) (Apr 18, 2001)
- 7: Doltaghey House (Apr 18, 2001)
- 8: Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni' (Apr 19, 2001)
- 9: Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni' (Apr 19, 2001)
- 10: h2g2 auto-messages (Apr 19, 2001)
- 11: Huw (ACE) (Apr 19, 2001)
- 12: Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese (Apr 20, 2001)
- 13: Doltaghey House (Apr 21, 2001)
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