A Conversation for Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

Post 1

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Just the right stuff for the Guide!

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A525250

The author is Arhuaine at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/U95228


A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

Post 2

Huw (ACE)

That's actually a pretty nice entry! I can't see anything wrong with it at all - I'm sure it will be recommended soon smiley - winkeye


A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

Post 3

Martin Harper

Excellent stuff! smiley - biggrin

one nitpick: your footnotes are like "C. Street: blah blah" - typically the guide tends to be more like: "C. Street is a blah blah blah" - so the footnotes are sentences. But the sub-eds will change that if you don't, so have no fear...

I really like the structure of this entry - it's nice and simple, and it makes the whole entry hang together and be part of a coherent whole. You tell an interesting story, and make a subject which could have dragged really interesting - touching on the general history and showing how it effected the mill.

My compliments to Arhuaine - and to Bossel for spotting this entry in the workshop.


A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Let's call it 'training on the job' smiley - biggrin


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Post 5

Doltaghey House

As the author of this entry I just want to thank Bossel for submitting it on my behalf. smiley - smiley The corrctions for the footnotes are no problem, I can do those myself. I'm glad people like this entry. I thought it was a bit on the dry side. But I'm fond of the place because I work there, and doing the research was fun.


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Post 6

Huw (ACE)

Hey, no problem - this is our Guide, so write about whatever you like! smiley - biggrin

Congrats again on this entry, it's good! Come on, scouts, pick it smiley - winkeye


A525250 - Houldsworth Mill, Stockport, UK

Post 7

Doltaghey House

Quick note... the corrections to the footnotes are done.


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Post 8

Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni'

Congratulations! I put forward your entry for inclusion into the Edited Guide and it was accepted! Well done! smiley - smiley

Touconos (Scout)


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Post 9

Touconos, Lord of the Toucans and Knight Who Says 'Ni'

"Thanks for your recommendation. You'll be glad to know that we think this
entry is great, and it has now gone into the Editorial Process for future
inclusion in the Edited Guide. When it does get into the Edited Guide, we
will email to let you know, but please bear in mind it can take a while for
entries to go through the sub-editing system. Thanks for writing for the guide!"


Congratulations!

Post 10

h2g2 auto-messages

Editorial Note: This thread has been moved out of the Peer Review forum because this entry has now been recommended for the Edited Guide.

If they have not been along already, the Scout who recommended your entry will post here soon, to let you know what happens next. Meanwhile you can find out what will happen to your entry here: http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/SubEditors-Process

Congratulations!


Congratulations!

Post 11

Huw (ACE)

Woohoo! Well done, Arhuaine!
smiley - biggrin


Congratulations!

Post 12

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

smiley - biggrin


Congratulations!

Post 13

Doltaghey House

gringringrin smiley - biggrin


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