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modemraider Started conversation Jun 6, 2009
Entry: Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers - A51931325
Author: modemraider - U13982104
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A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Jun 7, 2009
The text reads as if it is an exercise in writing English
I selected this part more or less randomly
>>>The paramedic law knows different levels of 2nd grade paramedics. 2nd grade paramedics on the basic level are allowed to administer a number of drugs. Paramedics on the second level are in addition to it allowed to perform venipuncture. Third level paramedics finally are allowed to perform intubation.<<
I'm but I don't understand exactly what you are trying to convey here. I think your meaning has become lost in translation.
I wish you well with your language progress and sincerely hope that you will gain from this site.
A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
h5ringer Posted Jun 9, 2009
Hi there modemraider
The content of this entry would make a very useful addition to the Guide. However, although I fully acknowledge that you are using English as a second-language, the text would have to be of a higher standard of English than it is at present. If this entry were picked by a Scout of inclusion in the Edited Guide, the sub-editor assigned to it would more or less have to rewrite every sentence to correct it.
I'll give you an example; take these few sentences:
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If I were the sub-editor, I would be asking you if you were happy with this alternative:
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I would also ask one of our medical knowledgables to check the technical aspects of the text.
But well done for having a go at this. I hope you'll enjoy contributing to this site
A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Jul 25, 2009
modemraider, are you still around, and are you willing to work on this?
If you need help with writing this in English, we have several native German speakers here to help you make it clearer - but before we put all that effort into it, we'd have to know you're still dedicated to writing this
A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Aug 17, 2009
A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
Not-so-bald-eagle Posted Aug 17, 2009
A51931325 - Emergency Medical Service (EMS) in Upper Austria - A Guide for Volunteers
Malabarista - now with added pony Posted Aug 17, 2009
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