h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

hello i wrote this anyone read it? is it complete crap or what? i'd really appreciate any feedback on it, thank you thank you. bye bye

ok i read it but i can give you a tip, go on edit entry and change the style to guide ml which is by the looks of it , what you have programmed it in but forgotten to change it from plain text.
-Zalisander.

ok thanx for telling me, it was all correct in HTML before the BBC took over but because they hid it at first i haven't logged on for ages so i didn't know they had changed the language for some reason. anyway now its changed after learning guide ml, why is it changed? oh well bye.

This is very good. Would make a nice edited entry if you feel like changing it to 3rd person. Otherwise see if The Post will publish it. It needs more readers.

I wonder if it's worth changing the subject of this entry to specifically 'How to make a Voodoo Doll'?
You may like to mention that they play a crucial role in the computer game series Monkey Island

Voodooo dolls only work if the person you are making one of believes they work, or does anyone here have any otherwise experience?

i totally forgot about this place and how fun it is, i'm glad a few ppl have read it, really want some serious help getting it in the guide read and enjoy.

Hi, you've done a good thing by submitting it to a writing workshop, you'll get lots of good advice from there.

In the meantime, have a read of these pages, <./>SubEditors-Style</.> and <./>SubEditors-GuideML</.>. They contain all the information you need. Good luck!

PS - I'm the person that posted as Mina in the thread above. I've got a new account now - I didn't want to confuse you.

Yes I read it. Congratulations on your trivializing of a very deep religion!