A Conversation for 20 January, 2009 - A Presidential Inauguration?
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Websailor Posted Feb 3, 2009
Well done. Re. Obama I have just read his two books, and I have to say I think what you see is what you get, if the other politicians will let him. He pulls no punches, is intelligent and educated.
As you say 'fingers crossed'>
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Feb 3, 2009
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AlexAshman Posted Feb 4, 2009
Hi there dmitrigheorgheni
I've just finished sub-editing your entry, the 'recommended' version of which you can find at A46904682
Please let me know if it's ok or not, and then I'll send it off to the Editors for eventual inclusion in the Edited Guide
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A46395327 - 20 January 2009 - A Presidential Inauguration?
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Feb 4, 2009
Wow, fast work.
Two changes, please:
>>somebody had to be President for four years...<<
Remove the word 'special' in that sentence. I mean it. ('Special somebody' sounds like a Hallmark card.)
Bullet point:>>It is required that the Bible be used...<<
Remove 'On the other hand'. If you feel that an introductory phrase is absolutely needed there, say, 'In contrast...' or 'Another deviation from custom was when John Quincy Adams...' (A Catholic missal and a lawbook are not opposites.)
Thanks.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Feb 5, 2009
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