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Entry: Pharaohs of the Fourth Dynasty - A45625845
Author: BigAl. Member of the Wessex Researchers Group - U723247

Well, I originally intended writing an Entry on the so-called 'Lost Pyramid' of Djedefre. However, I discovered that there are gaps in the existing Egypt Entries for Djoser, Snefre, and the architect, Imhotep. Hence I've tried to write an Entry covering these, without repeating too much of what is already in the EG. However, there is some repetition to provide continuity

Footnote on second mention of Imhotep, could it be moved to the first mention of him, please?

GB

well done on finding gaps and filling them in. Maybe something will eventually need to be done about the over lapping you are talking about. Right to reading the Entry itself

on reading this I've found the following

should 4th be fourth?

<> do you mean smooth?

<>

Worshippers of Re may have thought that this emulated the pattern that the sun's rays make as they shine down on earth through breaks in the clouds.

Are you a volunteer if you are paid for working?

<> should be 19th Century

causeways is spelt wrong

I don't think 'because' should start a sentence

Platea are you missing a letter?

You are doing well please keep writing

"should 4th be fourth?"
Not sure. I'll check as some point... or wait until somebody who knows for sure to let me know

"Smmoth>> do you mean smooth?"

'shining' > shine


'Are you a volunteer if you are paid for working?'. Changed volunterr' > 'highly-skilled workers'

<> should be 19th Century

causeways is spelt wrong. Why?

I don't think 'because' should start a sentence. I think it can

Platea > plateau

Opti

You are correct BigAl.. 4th Dynasty, it is similar to writing about a Century

lil

caauseway > causeway

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Yes! Well done, BigAl

folks (I was beginning to think that people were ignoring this Entry!! ) )

nah they ignore mine instead

But when did you last have a PR thread containing only 7 entries (barring your own s!?

Well, there's only me posting here: F48874?thread=6211574

Hmm, bit worrying really!

Hi there BigAl

I've just finished subbing your entry, which you can find at A46377769

I can't claim to know much about Ancient Egypt, so please do have a look and let me know if it's ok or not, then I'll send it off to the Editors.



Alex
Subeditor

That looks fine, Alex

(I thought I Credited someone though, for Additional Research )

You did:

kunoichi and "U183016"


I think the links need adjusting

The second link needs to be typed out in full as the first one is. They won't show until the Entry is edited, though