h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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This is my first attempt at an edited page, please let me know what you think about the Golden Horseshoe, an area in Ontario, Canada. Which is (surprise!) where I'm from.

I wasn't sure if I was allowed, but I linked to some outside pages, let me know if I should remove them.

Thanks

Colin ([email protected])

Howdy.

An absolutely fantastic first stab at an edited entry. There's one big thing wrong with it though. You need to use the 'add guide entry' button to create an entry intended for inclusion in the guide. As it stands, it's the text people see when they visit your page. This is intended to be a bit about you, or something you like, or just a rant against sultanas if you like. The 'U137358' is User137358. Once you press the 'add guide entry button' it'll become something like 'A346281', for Article346281. Small point, but vital.

There are a couple of sentences that don't read very well (ie, that about the industries. You're missing a 'to'), but all in all it's great.

But. It can't be put through the editing process at all until it's an Entry, not User data.

Cheers

Haze

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'The Golden Horseshoe - Ontario'.

Back to Entry - this became Edited Entry A493599 The Golden Horseshoe, Ontario, Canada