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I think people should know about the state I live in.

It is a good start, and may be able to get into the Edited Guide as it is, but a bit more would be nice Describe the place, what is the atmosphere like, where are good places to go, you mention all the different things you could do (though you do not mention if you can visit the mine), that sort of thing too Hope this helps Until later....
BCNU - Crescent

This entry could definitely use some expansion. Most of the entries about places accepted into the Edited Guide are longer, and have info on various tourist attractions, entertainment, eating out options, the local geography and culture, etc.

However, it looks like the author of this entry hasn't used h2g2 since early October, when this Peer Review thread was started. Should we consider moving this to the Writing Workshop?


Mikey

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