A Conversation for Global Warming - Rewrite
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chiefaberach Started conversation Jul 11, 2005
Wow! This is a very informative article. I didn't really know much about global warming despite about 10 years of 'debate' on TV and in the last 10 minutes I've found out far more about it than I even thought was involved. I have just read the original entry and it definitely needs to be replaced. Maybe quotes from that could be added to your entry as an example of the uninformed cynical nonsense that labels anyone who is interested in the future of the earth as "environmentalists". This usually goes along with an image of whingeing hippies who don't talk about anything else.
Anyway, enough ranting. I found a few typing errors in the entry and there was 1 sentence that didn't seem to scan right. I've listed all the mistakes with bits to be added or deleted in brackets.
Mean Sea Level, 3rd paragraph - "low-(0)lying"
Impact on Tundra, 4th paragraph - "The tundra ... of vast importance to global ecology" (is)
Desertification, 3rd paragraph - "The Kalahari region (stretches) covers"
Impact on World Forests, 2nd paragraph - "This has very serious implication...!" (s)
3rd paragraph - "if left to their own devices... Boreal forests" (.)
4th paragraph - "Different tree species favour temperatures ranges" (Other treee species favour different temperature ranges)
5th paragraph - "will decline..." (.)
Keep up the good work.
Cheers
chiefaberach
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BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows Posted Jul 11, 2005
CA. Much appreciate those comments, which I will deal with.
Could I please trouble you to copy your comment to the PR thread - just for completeness really.
Thanks.
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