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Peer Review: A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Icy North Started conversation Oct 22, 2008
Entry: The Millennium Stadium Jinx - A42482333
Author: Icy North - U225620
Greetings Peer Reviewers
I know there's a lot of football mentioned in this, but stick with it - there's a story buried in there somewhere.
Comments and suggestions welcome.
Icy
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Secretly Not Here Any More Posted Oct 22, 2008
I'll have a proper look shortly. Having been to a Millennium Stadium final, I'm quite intrigued.
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Oct 22, 2008
This is another well written and thoroughly enjoyable Entry by you Icy. I just wonder whether you will get away with the last quotation. I know can be a dirty game but should your Entry show this too?
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Icy North Posted Oct 23, 2008
Thanks Opti
Sorry to make you rush for the smelling salts at the end, there. If anyone else is mortally offended, I'll asterisk out a couple of letters.
Icy
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Oct 23, 2008
I'm used to the language due to where I work (a petrol station) very dirty there. Just not sure how much or little h2g2 can take. Having said that it didn't stop this image going ahead A22547838
I am of the opinion that most people say expletives when they have nothing else to say and thus they need not speak at all. Gets rid of high horse....
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Icy North Posted Oct 23, 2008
Thanks Beatrice
I haven't heard that one, but I did once find hundreds of Hello magazines when I dismantled some old kitchen units. I think the previous occupant used to hide them from her husband.
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
AlexAshman Posted Oct 24, 2008
"Southern Dressing Room [....] Southern Dressing room"
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Some consistency needed there.
From your Entry: "The run of jinxed finals started, of course, with the 1999 Rugby World Cup Final, in which Australia trounced France 35-12."
From the BBC article linked to: "Deafening cheers greeted the opening of the first game of the Rugby World Cup as Wales and Argentina began their battle at Cardiff's new Millennium Stadium."
So what about Wales and Argentina - was that before the stadium "started hosting English football finals"?
"in the Worthington Cup"
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"in the League Cup"
Otherwise, good work
Alex
A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
Icy North Posted Oct 24, 2008
I'll get to those, thanks Alex.
The jinx affected finals only. I'll try to make this clear.
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Icy North Posted Nov 3, 2008
Note to sub-editor.
I'm not 100% happy with the flow in the "Victims" section. If you agree, then I'll be happy to try and streamline it a bit.
Icy
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aka Bel - A87832164 Posted Nov 3, 2008
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted Nov 3, 2008
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Peer Review: A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx
- 1: Icy North (Oct 22, 2008)
- 2: Secretly Not Here Any More (Oct 22, 2008)
- 3: aka Bel - A87832164 (Oct 22, 2008)
- 4: h5ringer (Oct 22, 2008)
- 5: Icy North (Oct 22, 2008)
- 6: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Oct 22, 2008)
- 7: Icy North (Oct 23, 2008)
- 8: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Oct 23, 2008)
- 9: Beatrice (Oct 23, 2008)
- 10: Icy North (Oct 23, 2008)
- 11: AlexAshman (Oct 24, 2008)
- 12: Icy North (Oct 24, 2008)
- 13: h2g2 auto-messages (Nov 3, 2008)
- 14: Icy North (Nov 3, 2008)
- 15: aka Bel - A87832164 (Nov 3, 2008)
- 16: AlexAshman (Nov 3, 2008)
- 17: Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups (Nov 3, 2008)
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