A Conversation for The Millennium Stadium Jinx [Peer Review version]

Peer Review: A42482333 - The Millennium Stadium Jinx

Post 1

Icy North

Entry: The Millennium Stadium Jinx - A42482333
Author: Icy North - U225620

Greetings Peer Reviewers smiley - smiley

I know there's a lot of football mentioned in this, but stick with it - there's a story buried in there somewhere.

Comments and suggestions welcome.

smiley - cheers Icy


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Post 2

Secretly Not Here Any More

I'll have a proper look shortly. Having been to a Millennium Stadium final, I'm quite intrigued.


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Post 3

aka Bel - A87832164

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Post 4

h5ringer

Excellent Icy. Just one comment at the mo: What's this game rubgy? smiley - laugh


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Post 5

Icy North

Thanks h5ringer smiley - ok

Yes, it's not only the ball that's wonky... smiley - biro


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Post 6

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

This is another well written and thoroughly enjoyable Entry by you Icy. smiley - biggrin I just wonder whether you will get away with the last quotation. I know smiley - football can be a dirty game but should your Entry show this too?


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Post 7

Icy North

Thanks Opti smiley - smiley

Sorry to make you rush for the smelling salts at the end, there. If anyone else is mortally offended, I'll asterisk out a couple of letters.

smiley - cheers Icy


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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

smiley - laugh I'm used to the language due to where I work (a petrol station) very dirty there. Just not sure how much or little h2g2 can take. Having said that it didn't stop this image going ahead A22547838

I am of the opinion that most people say expletives when they have nothing else to say and thus they need not speak at all. Gets rid of high horse....


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Post 9

Beatrice

Lovey stuff Icy smiley - applause

Hmm, have we an entry on the curse of Hello! magazine yet...smiley - tongueout


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Post 10

Icy North

Thanks Beatrice smiley - ok

I haven't heard that one, but I did once find hundreds of Hello magazines when I dismantled some old kitchen units. I think the previous occupant used to hide them from her husband.


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AlexAshman


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"Southern Dressing Room [....] Southern Dressing room"
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Some consistency needed there.

smiley - football
From your Entry: "The run of jinxed finals started, of course, with the 1999 Rugby World Cup Final, in which Australia trounced France 35-12."

From the BBC article linked to: "Deafening cheers greeted the opening of the first game of the Rugby World Cup as Wales and Argentina began their battle at Cardiff's new Millennium Stadium."

So what about Wales and Argentina - was that before the stadium "started hosting English football finals"?

smiley - football
"in the Worthington Cup"
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"in the League Cup"

Otherwise, good work smiley - ok

Alex smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Icy North

I'll get to those, thanks Alex.

The jinx affected finals only. I'll try to make this clear.


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Post 14

Icy North

Note to sub-editor.

I'm not 100% happy with the flow in the "Victims" section. If you agree, then I'll be happy to try and streamline it a bit.

smiley - cheers Icy


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Post 15

aka Bel - A87832164

Ooh, congrats! smiley - footballsmiley - bubblysmiley - wizardsmiley - applausesmiley - witch


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Post 16

AlexAshman


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Post 17

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

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