A Conversation for Tibet By $30 Bicycle

Removed

Post 1

Little Rich

This post has been removed.


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 2

ZOE(Scout), Patron Saint of Multiple Personalities{TANGO NEEDS HELP WITH PROJECT :STARS @ A403930 ALL STAR-GAZERS PLEASE PUT YOU

I find your article excellent and I am sure it will be approved.

Just one major change: As all entries in H2G2 is supposed to be living, i.e. growing all the time, it must be written in the third person.

For instance rather than "I" use "one researcher reports.." etc or "It is good to..." rather than "you must..."

This is so that when I (or any other researcher for that matter) follow in your cycle tracks and find some other useful observations to make, it will not seem like the article is kina "spit an paste", if you understand what I mean.

Keep up the good work.


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 3

Little Rich

Thankyou a shed load for your encouragement - it's good to know I'm on the right lines. No first person eh? Hmm, could take a little effort. Should be a laugh.

Thanks again - speak to you round.

Little Rich


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 4

ZOE(Scout), Patron Saint of Multiple Personalities{TANGO NEEDS HELP WITH PROJECT :STARS @ A403930 ALL STAR-GAZERS PLEASE PUT YOU

I'm glad you are willing to make effort in changing the article. It should realy be included in the edited guide.

Keep us up to date with your adventures!

Oh! and please post a note here after you made the changes to this article.


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 5

Crescent

Just to echo ZOE. An excellent Entry, and I would have thought there would be no problems getting into the Edited Guide smiley - smiley A very enjoyable Entry. So what was the food like smiley - smiley Until later....
BCNU - Crescent


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 6

Little Rich

Okay,

Well, it wasn't as difficult as I feared and the new, improved, mostly impersonal Tibet by $30 Bicycle is now ready. Hope it still reads ok.

Enjoy

Little Rich


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 7

Crescent

Spot on mannie smiley - smiley Any thing else can be caught by the SubEds smiley - smiley Though reading it again, you may want to emphasise just how important being able to fix a bike is smiley - smiley Well, until later....
BCNU - Crescent


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 8

Little Rich

That's it, I've definately finished it this time!

Thanks again to everyone who's said nice things and made helpful suggestions. I hope I've managed to meet them all.

Thanks once more!


Removed

Post 9

h2g2 auto-messages

This post has been removed.


A423262 Tibet by $30 Bicycle

Post 10

Little Rich

Wahooo!

Edited eh?! Top Banana!!!!

Let us know if there's anything needed.


Key: Complain about this post