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Post 1

wrekage

http:www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/a416585

thanks to everyone who had a looked at this entry i have now made a few adjustments it it is now ready for review again thanks


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Post 2

Ormondroyd

Your link didn't work, wrekage. But this one does:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A416585


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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

I'd suggest changing the title a bit, so that people know it's referrning to a band. For example, "In Flames: The Band".

smiley - aliensmile
Mikey


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Post 4

Ormondroyd

Also, in the Entry, you should really call them 'In Flames', with capital letters, since that's how they refer to themselves on the website!


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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

you should get rid of those typos (their/there are quite a few smiley - yikes ) and Guide entry ready smiley - smiley


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smiley - erm This is a good entry!

I agree - the typos could do with fixing, and capitals would probably help too. And maybe "In FLames - The Band" would be a better title in case there were people (like me) who didn't know this was the name of a band. smiley - smiley


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Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Oh yeah smiley - sadface

I guess there won't be any reply from wrekage as s/he has unsubscribed from this thread. According to the rules, this one will be a Flea Market thread by Dec 20...


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.

smiley - sadface


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Post 9

Tube - the being being back for the time being

I think I might go and take over the entry once it goes to the market, so don't worry Niwt smiley - cheerup

I think I saw them once or twice at festivals...


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