h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

I would greatly appreciate it if anyone feels like reading this, my first entry, and commenting on it. Suggestions and additions are more than welcome.

Great for a first entry, but there are a few problems with it.. For example you use "I" and "You" a lot, and you mustn't do that, tut tut

Hi

I'm relatively new here, so haven't the faintest idea what you must do to actually get an entry approved.

However, I read the article, and can say that I found it quite entertaining/amusing and wish you luck in getting it approved!

Please tell us more about the Pseudologia Fantastica sufferers, though - without naming names, of course!

To get an entry approved, you first have to write it. See http://www.h2g2.com/writing-guidelines for help.

Then follow the instructions on the http://www.h2g2.com/peerreview page (the one that this forum is hanging off) and others will help you make it even better.

Then a Scout (like myself) comes along and, if your entry is one of the very best, it gets chosen, and will be edited, and finally approved.



Back to the entry..

On second glance it looks less serious than it should be, and very exaggerated.. Ack

Could you include more facts or statistice but not too many. The balance has to be just right, like in a douhgnut for example.

Editorial Note: This Conversation has been moved to the new 'Flea Market' Forum.

This is where we move any Peer Review, Writing Workshop or Alternative Writing Workshop Conversations where the original author has *not* posted to h2g2 for three months. This prevents the active Review Forums from clogging up with dormant entries, but in the Flea Market they can be picked up by others and polished off.

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