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Entry: Dunoon Scotland - in progress - A40379934
Author: minichessemouse - U8131912

i know it needs a bit of work, but am i heading in the right generall direction?

Yes it does need some more work and you need to fill it up with a wee bit more information.


What is " Scotlands National Park"? An small explanation to show the reader what it is exactly would be nice.

You have to check your spelling and your punctuation as well.

So the Clyde is a big enough river to have Navy ships on it is it? I didn't know that and I'm not from the UK so for the benefit of those who don't know you need to supply them with that information.
What were the Americans there for?

Actually I don't know where Glasgow is to be truthful, is it close to the border or is it way up north somewhere.


If there are other small towns and villages surrounding Dunoon, why not name a couple of them?

Why do you need to take a ferry then and what is the"rest and be thankful" road to the town." ?


So there is a lot more work and information needed in this to bring it up to scratch but you have to start somewhere and you'll get plenty of help here.

Cheers.

Hi minichessemouse

You might want to have a look at these entries for an idea of what direction your entry could go:

A956270
A25436405
A526123
A293203
A4298862

These are only examples. The Guide has many entries on towns and cities both in and out of the UK

An entry on Dunoon was started once before: A34453

See you're online mini - you doing anything with this Entry?

oops! i am working on something else at the moment, but i will do some more to this when i have finished my current venture which should be in peer review fairly soon.

mini

Excellent

You could mention some of the local sites/buildings, like Queens Hall being the town's major multi-function hall complex, that Dunoon Grammar School is over three hundred and fifty years old, Castle Toward, etc.

You could research famous personages, such as actor Eric Campbell (of Charlie Chaplin movie fame), and maybe even the Dunoon Family, themselfs.

i am going to come back to this, might take it out of peer review though as i dont really have the time to do it justice at the moment.

mini