h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Karlstadt am Main - a lovely, medieval town on the river Main - A3865070
Author: blondeandclever - U1471914

I hope this review is okay, and any comments on style of writing, the place itself or ideas are mostly welcome!

hi there BnC (if you don't mind me callin' ya that?)

This is a great little piece on Karlstadt Am Main Loads of neat little information.

If you want some pointers on writing Edited Guide Entries about places you might like to try browsing around the h2g2 Royal Geographical Society here A1286886

They've loads of ideas on how Entries about places can be made brilliant and be accepted into the Edited Guide so the whole worldly world will read them!

You've a great start with this, a bit of prettyfying (is that a word?) and some other bits and bobs per some suggestions from the Society I mentioned and you're on to a winner me thinks.
Frood

Hi, blondeandclever!

This looks like the makings of a great entry on Karlstadt am Main--you have lots of interesting infromation and it is written in a lively way.

The main thing I can see that would improve it is to organise it under different headers. At the moment, the information is a bit scattered--cultural events, for example, are dealt with in two different places. If you use headers like:


Historic Sites

Wine

Eating Out

and so on, I think it would make the entry easier to follow. You don't have to use GuideMl to do this, just type then on separate lines like I did here.


Azara

Aside from formatting, is there anything else preventing this from being Edited Guide material?

It looks like blondeandclever has elvised (last posting on May 21), so I propose a move to the flea market. Any seconds?

Seconded

Belatedly added