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Just a few more things Opti.

""At the same time lawman Eliott Ness and his gang the Untouchables had come accross information regarding how capone orchestrated his rackets. So together the IRS Special Intelligence Unit, Eliott Ness and the Untouchables all sought to bring him down.""

**At the same time, lawman Elliot Ness set up an elite group that were to become known as the Untouchables. This was because the men he chose couldn't be bought or bribed nor could they be influenced by any of the corrupt police that were in the pay of the gangs. His primary task was to bring down the gangsters illegal empire.**



""were proved right not to when his gang were charged with 5,000 counts of tax evasion.""

**were proved right not to when Capone and most of his gang members were charged with 5,000 counts of tax evasion.**


""He was primarily imprisoned in Cook County Jail as the judge decided he would not receive bail and was transferred to the US Penitentiary in Atlanta on 4 May, 1932 and fined over $50,000""

**He was imprisoned in Cook County Jail initially but as the trial judge had refused bail, Capone was transferred to the US Penitentiary in Atlanta on 4 May, 1932 and fined over $50,000**

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Entry: Al Capone - American Gangster - A37618400

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Would you like a credit?

That would be a lovely gesture, Opti

means 'joke' to me confused.

aah.. it can also mean 'hint'..

good job I did it then don't want Lil on my back

As if I would

I know

That's entirely upto you Opti. I was just, hopefully, showing you how it's better to give enough detail to a) avoid confusion, b) make the article flow better and c) avoid the need to use big block quotes to 'fill' an article out.

I'll let other's have a say but it's certainly looking more complete now.

Consider it done You are credited.

I think I may have put off others.

This is looking good, Opti, a vast improvement on the original submission, well done

GB

Looking good now Opti.

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well done Opti,

Well done, Opti!






lil xx

Congrats! This one shaped up nicely.

very well done Opti!

everyone for your kind