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Peer Review: A35724044 - Bat and Trap

Post 1

Pointy112

Entry: Bat and Trap - A35724044
Author: Pointy112 - U11879875

Bat and Trap is a fun, low-energy pub game played in Kent. It's a good opportunity to get out of the house on a week night and do something other than watch TV.

I hope this article does it justice.


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Post 2

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


I like it! smiley - ok


Personally I would get rid of the 'Background' heading, but let's see what others advise first smiley - winkeye


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Post 3

Pointy112

I'm happy to go with that. It's got the main "Bat and Trap" heading so I don't think it misses anything without the heading.

M


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Post 4

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


For reviewers wondering about those blobs, you might like to read this thread: F47997?thread=5418331&post=63139861#p63139861

smiley - biggrin


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Post 5

h5ringer

Classic example of a good HooToo topic smiley - applause

>>there is a little less running around and a lot more beer involved<< - sounds a *lot* like *English* cricket smiley - laugh


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Post 6

Pointy112

I've just updated the article to link to only Edit entries, or wikipedia articles where none exist.

M


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Post 7

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Hi M,

You are showing Holland twice in your referenced sites. It seems one of them should be jealousy smiley - winkeye


Pity about the w*k*


*throws down sawdust for when Elentari appears*


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Post 8

Pointy112

Gah, the cut&paste monster got me. The link pointed to the right place - I just missed the "TITLE" attribute.

re "w*k*" - is that a running gag on here, or am I missing something?

M


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Post 9

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


>>re "w*k*" - is that a running gag on here, or am I missing something?<<

Now that would be telling smiley - winkeye


You are allowed to use other sites smiley - smiley


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Post 10

McKay The Disorganised

looks good to me - and I like the pictures.

smiley - cider


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Post 11

Elentari

Not sure why I need sawdust, but there you go. smiley - erm

I don't really have any comments to make. I've never heard of this game before but it sounds fun and the entry is great. The only thing I was wondering about is maybe a brief explanation of how the game is played before you go into the equipment, because it's a little strange talking about the equipment before you have any idea what it's for. smiley - smiley


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Post 12

Malabarista - now with added pony

I got a fairly good idea of how this is played, and since I've never even attempted to understand cricket, that's a good thing smiley - winkeye

Re the female players - are the leagues mixed, or do they play separately? I merely ask because in most sports, for some reason, they won't let the girls play in the same team smiley - winkeye

And do the corner poles have a bar over the top, or do you just have to gague if it's over or under when the ball is in the middle?


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Post 13

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


Elentari,

He mentioned W*k*.. Don't your normally break the rules and spit?


Sorry, if it isn't you..


*puts down a spitoon for whoever it is that does spit*



smiley - erm


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Post 14

Elentari

Ah, I wondered if that was it. I think I have done on occasion, yes. smiley - hug


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Post 15

lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned


*hands you the spittoon*


Be my guest! smiley - hug


smiley - biggrin


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Post 16

Pointy112

I put the equipment first because I wanted to get the picture of the trap in as quickly as possible. It's an odd piece of kit and trying to describe playing without first seeing the picture would probably confuse more than the way round it is at the moment.

I'll change it if the consensus is that it should be swapped, but I'll leave at as it is for now.

M


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Post 17

Malabarista - now with added pony

I think it's fine. A bat and a ball are easy enough to recognise, and if you don't know how the trap works, you don't understand the hitting the ball up bit.


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Post 18

Pointy112

I've added a bit about gender - see Team Formation.

Basically because it's a low-energy (and some would say low-skill) sport, *and* beer is involved, both sexes perform about as well (or as badly) as each other.


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Post 19

Pointy112

While I think of it, is there a way to get the image of the trap modified slightly? Things I've noticed are:

+ There should be a big round black circle on the flap at the front of it.

+ The perspective on the indents where you place the ball is a bit cranky.

+ There should also be a small dot where the rod the beam pivots on passes through the trap.

They're all small things I know, but if they could be tweaked it would be super...

M


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Post 20

Sho - employed again!

Nice article. From what I can see the real difference between this and cricket is the absence of cucumber sandwiches.

smiley - applause


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