h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

bluebottle, GOOD STORY! seriously, if i didn't have to sit in this chair that hurts my back, the last 15 minutes of so would have been really great ( rather than just great ). i hope you have a lot of luck getting it published.

Thanks, Canadian Girl, I think that with a little editing, it could make a nice children's story, what do you think Aendr?
And you are right that most people's writign style calms down after a while. I remember when I was in the first year of Middle School we were taught to write in paragraphs for the first time. We were told that they happened to seperate each point and part of what was written (I can't think of how to describe a paragraph, you know what they are and what I mean) and half the class thought that the teacher meant that each paragraph was like a chapter in a book!

Yep, I agree, very enjoyable. However, 3002 AD? A bit of a mouthful surely? What is wrong with plain old 3000 AD? Other than that I enjoyed it. Gives a very nice sense of who this kid is and how he thinks and acts. I also rather liked the whole "colour supplement" idea.

I'm glad you liked it - but no, I'm not putting the other 9 chapters on H2G2. I guess I'm paranoid about people nicking my ideas, but you at least get a flavour.

As for 3002 AD - it was a kinda combination on "2001: A Space Odyssey" and "2000 AD" (another comic). I don't think the exact name really matters that much, but thanks for reading and enjoying.

I agree this was very good. It's a shame I won't get to read the rest.

Well, I could give you a summary if you'd like...

Do at least tell me what happens next. Please?

I think that the first word of chapter 2 is "Max", if that helps.

Oh, and in the next chapter you meet Gerald. He's very unusual. He doesn't make any sense at all.