A Conversation for The Man in the Mist

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Post 1

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

almost like a ghost using the indian temple as a home base, and venturing out to haunt familiar places.
For a minute, I thought that steven was cursed and passing the curse along to the narrarator, like the old man had to him.
Makes you think. Good use of story elements like the ciggarette and the eyes, the bottles and the narrarator's own thoughts.


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Post 2

Peregrin

smiley - biggrin thanks!

Yeah I thought about making the narrator go a bit la-la like Steven did... but decided to just hint at it smiley - smiley


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Post 3

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

write more, please!


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Post 4

Peregrin

smiley - blush Okay... will do when I have time smiley - smiley


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Post 5

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

smiley - smiley thanks. have been going down the list at fiction central, and am enjoying it. I like your stories, because they make me...UUUHHGGHH...think.


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Post 6

Peregrin

smiley - biggrin I hope that's a good thing...


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Post 7

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

smiley - laugh painful though.


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Post 8

Peregrin

I look forward to reading any of your creations smiley - smiley

*wonders what this Thinking thing is like and decides to try it one of these days*


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Post 9

ex-Rambling. Thingite. Dog. Pythonist. Deceased.

smiley - ghost ly smiley - laugh


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