A Conversation for Sri Ramakrishna - Indian Spiritual Master

Peer Review: A3138996 - Ramakrishna

Post 1

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Entry: Ramakrishna - A3138996
Author: John-the-gardener, h2g2 Friends of Tibet (A2170982) - U33262


Om


A3138996 - Ramakrishna

Post 2

Gnomon - time to move on

Good entry! smiley - ok

You don't seem to say when and why he started being known as Ramakrishna.

Two typos:

repleat --> replete
1960's --> 1960s

smiley - smiley


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Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

It might be worth adding a footnote explaining avatar:

avatarThe incarnation of a deity in human or animal form.


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Post 4

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Thanks, I'll do that. smiley - ok


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Post 5

Jimi X

Nice one jtg!

smiley - cheers
- X


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Post 6

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Thanks Jimi. smiley - cheers


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Post 8

Gnomon - time to move on

smiley - bubbly Congratulations! smiley - bubbly


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Post 9

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Well done smiley - cheers


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Post 10

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Namaste smiley - smiley


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Post 11

echomikeromeo

smiley - applause


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Post 12

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"


smiley - smiley


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Post 13

SchrEck Inc.

Hi John,

I've been given another one of your fine entries to subedit, and the result is at A8623460. If you spot anything that needs attention, please drop me a note. smiley - bigeyes

SchrEck Inc.


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Post 14

John the gardener says, "Free Tibet!"

Looks fine to me. Thanks again, SchrEck. smiley - smiley

JTG smiley - cheers


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Post 15

SchrEck Inc.

smiley - ok


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