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Post 1

A Super Furry Animal

Entry: Skylarking - The XTC Album - A3016621
Author: Reddyfreddy. (Unique, SK, A-PG & PoN) - U232535

Well, once I got started, I couldn't stop! This entry is a companion piece to A3003553 (XTC - The Band). Enjoy!

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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Post 2

Beatrice

oooh, oooh, can I be the first to comment?smiley - biggrin

I think it's pretty much complete - but if I were to make a couple of suggestions they would be for a wee bit more about the musical style of each song (any unusual instrumentation, f'rinstance).

And in a couple of them you've quoted some lyrics - I'd stick in a line or 2 from each song - whichever you feel are the most significant (or is that encroaching on copyright stuff?)

Well donesmiley - choc


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Post 3

A Super Furry Animal

OK, will see what I can add in about musical styles. (with my vast technical knowledge of music smiley - winkeye)

I've put in lyrics where I felt it relevant, not sure if I want to put a quote in for each song, though. Maybe I'll put a link to the lyrics on XTC's site instead?

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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Post 4

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Real nice, and almost ready I reckon. One thing you need to do is put the quotes into and tags:
Blah blah blah

smiley - ok


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Post 5

Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

Just one comment:
'XTC were one of the most influential bands...'

'was'. Not 'were'.


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Post 6

Kat - From H2G2

It's looking spiffy.

Maybe a rounding off paragraph at the end? Or am I the only fan of rounding off paragraphs? Otherwise it just cuts short from the last song...which may be what you want it to do and I may be being extremely boring...

Kat
(scooting and scouting)


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Post 7

Natalie

Another great XTC Entry - thanks Reddyfreddy(o!).

As I was reading it I thought 'I hope he mentions the dodgy pronunciation of 'umbilical'!

I had no idea about the theme of 'Another Satellite' either! Do you remember them doing 'The Man Who Sailed Around His Soul' on the Tube's Prisoner special (groovy '60s girls dancing on a chess board).

Great! I can't wait for the one on 'Go' (especially the masterful 'I Am the Onions'...or something).


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Post 8

Ormondroyd

Very fine, Readyfreddo! smiley - ok

The only things that need fixing are minor style points. Song titles should really be in single quote marks, and there seems to be a capital letter missing from the start of the penultimate paragraph. But it's great to see this underrated band getting more recognition on h2g2! smiley - smiley


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Post 9

A Super Furry Animal

Thanks, people, for all your comments. I'm away from a computer more or less for the next week or so, but I will update the entry when I get a chance.

smiley - cheers

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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Post 10

A Super Furry Animal

OK, people, I've updated this entry, hopefully got the lyric quotes right this time, and I've even added in a closing paragraph! See what you think.

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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Post 12

Natalie

smiley - applause

Drowning here in summer's cauldron...


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Post 13

Ormondroyd

smiley - applause That's really super! smiley - biggrinsmiley - bubbly


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Post 14

Beatrice

I know someone who'll be feeling happy smiley - winkeye...

I wonder if Happy will mind?


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Post 15

A Super Furry Animal

I'll be feeling lucky instead...in about 28 hours!smiley - evilgrin

Cheers all! smiley - ta

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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Post 16

Beatrice

That'll make lucky happy then.smiley - kiss

Should we get a room?


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Post 17

A Super Furry Animal

Yup. smiley - smooch

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Well done - another XTC entry in the EG smiley - cheers


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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hi there! I've been assigned to sub this one, is there anything I should know before I dig in?

smiley - cheers
Mikey


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Post 20

A Super Furry Animal

Hi Mikey, I think everything's there - no unusual spellings to watch out for or anything like that. If you have any questions please let me know.

RFsmiley - evilgrin


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