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8584330

Entry: Humboldt State University Marching Lumberjacks - A29014102
Author: Happy Nerd - U8584330

An entry about a different sort of marching band.


A29014102 - Humboldt State University Marching Lumberjacks

Post 2

McKay The Disorganised

That's my kindda marching band smiley - biggrin

I wanna join.

smiley - cider


A29014102 - Humboldt State University Marching Lumberjacks

Post 3

J

Leave it to college students...
Great entry.


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Post 4

boredlaura

smiley - ok

This is great, the only thing is, it made me want to pack up and move to Arcata!


A29014102 - Humboldt State University Marching Lumberjacks

Post 5

AlexAshman


Good Entry - my only point would be to ask what 'slickers' are - plastic ponchos? smiley - ermsmiley - erm


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Post 6

8584330

Hi, Alex. Slickers are raincoats made of a smooth material, sometimes a rubberized fabric, and sometimes plastic. I'll change this word to "raincoats".

- HNsmiley - smiley


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Post 7

McKay The Disorganised

I don't think raincoats catches what slickers are - I'd continue to use slickers with a footnote saying rubberised fabric coat.

smiley - cider


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8584330

smiley - ermOkay, I reworked this sentence. Here is a link to a site with pictures of the type of rain gear most college marching bands wear: http://dancecheer.net/dirraingear.html

The Marching Lumberjacks wear something more like this:
http://www.davidmorgan.com/product_info.php?products_id=601

Happy Nerdsmiley - smiley


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Post 9

Fizzymouse- no place like home



I loved this Happy Nerd.smiley - applause


I think suspenders are what we call braces here, other than that it looks great to me.smiley - cheers



smiley - mouse


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Post 10

8584330

Thank you Fizzy smiley - mouse.

I changed suspenders to braces, but added a footnote, because over here braces are used to straighten teeth.

Happy Nerdsmiley - smiley


A29014102 - Humboldt State University Marching Lumberjacks

Post 11

h5ringer

Two nations divided by a common language smiley - headhurts


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Post 12

8584330

Hi h5ringer,

>>>>>> Two nations divided by a common language

So true. In this entry, I dodged the mack-mac bullet and the trousers-pants bullet, only to catch the suspenders-braces bullet.smiley - laugh


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Post 13

Fizzymouse- no place like home



Well, you know us Brits .... belt and braces most of the time.smiley - winkeye


.... and just for the record we put a *different* set of braces on our teeth.smiley - biggrin


Lookin' gooooood Happy Nerd.smiley - cheers


smiley - mouse


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Post 14

U168592

smiley - boing


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Post 15

Jimi X

Fine entry.

smiley - cheers


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Post 17

AlexAshman


smiley - applausesmiley - bubbly


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Fizzymouse- no place like home



smiley - cheers


smiley - applause



smiley - mouse


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Post 19

8584330

Thank you!smiley - smiley


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