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Writing Workshop: A2882487 - NASCAR: An American Institution

Post 1

broelan

Entry: NASCAR: An American Institution - A2882487
Author: broelan - [Collaborators needed - not 'Done' yet!] - U155058

HELP!! I hate the ending of this.

This is intended to replace A215182 currently in the Collaborative Workshop F57152?thread=314080. An improvement at any rate. Any suggestions appreciated smiley - ok


A2882487 - NASCAR: An American Institution

Post 2

J

I'm no NASCAR scholar (though I've met one in a trailer park in Kentucky) but this looks good to me.

I saw the NASCAR IMAX show when I went to California this year. It was neat... and it makes all of this seem vaguely familiar to me.

And with that weak reassurance of quality, I wish you good luck smiley - smiley

smiley - blacksheep


A2882487 - NASCAR: An American Institution

Post 3

broelan

What astounding coincidences! (In all seriousness.)

I'm not a NASCAR scholar either, but I live with one in a trailer park in Missouri (I asked him to read this and got a grunt of approval smiley - winkeye).

I saw the IMAX show when I was in Arkansas this year. It was cool, and gave me a headache and made me slightly nauseous.

Even without expertise I value your opinion, and thanks for reading it smiley - smiley


A2882487 - NASCAR: An American Institution

Post 4

J

By the way, the ending seems just fine to me. smiley - smiley


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Post 5

broelan

Thanks. When I wrote it I thought it was a bit abrupt.
As someone not very well versed in the subject, does it make sense? Is there anything that isn't adequately explained or otherwise murky?


A2882487 - NASCAR: An American Institution

Post 6

J

Well, I understood it perfectly, but that's not to say a Briton would smiley - winkeye

smiley - blacksheep


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