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Peer Review: A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
frenchbean Started conversation Jul 29, 2004
Entry: Robert Louis Stevenson - A2741276
Author: Frenchbean <5 stars> I got sweet dreams ... who could ask for anything more? - U236943
Here's a literary one for you Peerers
It's an intro to RLS's life - not a critique of his work, nor an analysis of his inspirations. My interest was sparked when I visited Vailima, his Samoan home and place of his death.
The fact that he is a fabulous author and his books were part of my childhood, spurred me into finding out more
As ever, please peer, comment and pick
Fb
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
nullspace Posted Jul 29, 2004
A good read, Frenchbean.
Only a typo from me:
>He was more interested in prividing satisfaction for the nameless longing of the reader,<....providing.
stu
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Pinniped Posted Jul 29, 2004
Really good, Frenchbean
Just rambling, this, and perhaps you know it already, but the verse on Fanny's grave wasn't written explicitly as an epitaph (unlike RLS's own "Requiem"). It's the third verse of a poem that forms Chapter 26 of his posthumously-published "Songs of Travel", called "My Wife".
http://www.literaturepost.com/chapter/20625.html
Personally, I think that the first verse is marvellous, but that the poem then gets progressively weaker. Then again, I am a metallurgist. Arthur Conan Doyle's headstone, incidentally, borrows the "steel-true, blade-straight" couplet.
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
Woodpigeon Posted Jul 30, 2004
Hi Frenchbean - I love this entry! It is so clearly written, and so concise it was a pleasure to read.
Again I will seek refuge in pedantry because I have learned something from your entry and I have little of value to contribute in terms of content:
"the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood" - I don't know if this reads well. "are a part of the experience of childhood"?
That's about it for me - well done!
Woodpigeon
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JulesK Posted Jul 30, 2004
Hi Fb!
I've learnt lots here that I didn't know !
I found a typo...but someone already did. I thought of linking to a tuberculosis entry...but there isn't one.
I give up - it's great !
Jules
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Berek - A619049 William Wallace - Braveheart and Scottish Patriot :o) Posted Jul 30, 2004
Hi, Fb!
I enjoyed this very much - You might like to link to the edited entry for Edinburgh, and I think 'I travel for travel's sake. The great affair...' should be on two lines, not one.
Good work though!
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
frenchbean Posted Jul 30, 2004
Typo done, Stu
I've added a footnote about the source of the poem, Pinn. Thanks for that.
Woodpigeon - I'm not sure about that wording. What I wrote sounds better to me Anybody else got a view on that one?
Fb
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
frenchbean Posted Jul 30, 2004
Hi Berek
Link to Edinburgh entry done
The two sentences in one line are like that because it's not a poem, but prose.
Fb
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Jul 31, 2004
Another fantastic entry Fb, you just keep cranking them out
Carribean - Caribbean
I believe 'Young Folks' should be in italics.
"To this day, the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood"
Whose childhood? Not mine - I never read any RLS books as a child... or ever I think. I think I had to read Kidnapped at school...
Scout
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
JulesK Posted Jul 31, 2004
"To this day, the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood"
I guess Gosho has a point, Fb, I've never read anything by RLS either. Obviously heard of him and of Treasure Island, but only in passing, as it were.
Maybe it could read '...are a part of many people's childhood'?
Or maybe not!
Jules
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Z Posted Jul 31, 2004
Yes you could say that though I have to admit that I read it sevearl times. Even if you didn't read it yourself wasn't this the orginal 'pirate' story, influcencing many other childhood favourites?
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Z Posted Jul 31, 2004
Ooh I should add that I loved the entry! I have to say that Robert Louis Stevenson must be one of my favourite authors, and 'From a Railway Carriage Window' from the Child's Garden of Verse is still my favourite poem, Ooh apart from 'The Night Mail'.
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frenchbean Posted Aug 2, 2004
Woodpigeon - I've changed the childhood bit. Thanks for commenting on that, Gosho et al Does it make better sense now?
Thank you for the comments, however pedantic It's good to know that peerers really do peer
Fb
A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
frenchbean Posted Aug 6, 2004
Thank you
I have a picture of you there with your fine toothcombe, raking through entries, looking for typos and punctuation mistakes
Fb
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Aug 6, 2004
Hey, I'm the one who does that
Ok, so my comb has a few teeth missing - when you don't have any hair you don't notice that sort of thing
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Peer Review: A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson
- 1: frenchbean (Jul 29, 2004)
- 2: nullspace (Jul 29, 2004)
- 3: Pinniped (Jul 29, 2004)
- 4: Woodpigeon (Jul 30, 2004)
- 5: frenchbean (Jul 30, 2004)
- 6: JulesK (Jul 30, 2004)
- 7: Berek - A619049 William Wallace - Braveheart and Scottish Patriot :o) (Jul 30, 2004)
- 8: frenchbean (Jul 30, 2004)
- 9: frenchbean (Jul 30, 2004)
- 10: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Jul 31, 2004)
- 11: JulesK (Jul 31, 2004)
- 12: Z (Jul 31, 2004)
- 13: Z (Jul 31, 2004)
- 14: frenchbean (Aug 2, 2004)
- 15: JulesK (Aug 2, 2004)
- 16: J (Aug 5, 2004)
- 17: frenchbean (Aug 6, 2004)
- 18: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Aug 6, 2004)
- 19: J (Aug 6, 2004)
- 20: frenchbean (Aug 7, 2004)
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