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Peer Review: A2741276 - Robert Louis Stevenson

Post 1

frenchbean

Entry: Robert Louis Stevenson - A2741276
Author: Frenchbean <5 stars> I got sweet dreams ... who could ask for anything more? - U236943

Here's a literary one for you Peerers smiley - smiley

It's an intro to RLS's life - not a critique of his work, nor an analysis of his inspirations. My interest was sparked when I visited Vailima, his Samoan home and place of his death.

The fact that he is a fabulous author and his books were part of my childhood, spurred me into finding out more smiley - ok

As ever, please peer, comment and pick smiley - laugh

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nullspace

A good read, Frenchbean.

Only a typo from me:

>He was more interested in prividing satisfaction for the nameless longing of the reader,<....providing.

stu


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Post 3

Pinniped


Really good, Frenchbeansmiley - ok

Just rambling, this, and perhaps you know it already, but the verse on Fanny's grave wasn't written explicitly as an epitaph (unlike RLS's own "Requiem"). It's the third verse of a poem that forms Chapter 26 of his posthumously-published "Songs of Travel", called "My Wife".

http://www.literaturepost.com/chapter/20625.html

Personally, I think that the first verse is marvellous, but that the poem then gets progressively weaker. Then again, I am a metallurgistsmiley - winkeye. Arthur Conan Doyle's headstone, incidentally, borrows the "steel-true, blade-straight" couplet.


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Woodpigeon

Hi Frenchbean - I love this entry! It is so clearly written, and so concise it was a pleasure to read.

Again I will seek refuge in pedantry because I have learned something from your entry and I have little of value to contribute in terms of content:

"the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood" - I don't know if this reads well. "are a part of the experience of childhood"?

That's about it for me - well done!

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Post 5

frenchbean

Thank you for those comments smiley - blush

I'll get onto the typos and pedantry later today smiley - ok

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JulesK

Hi Fb!

I've learnt lots here that I didn't know smiley - ta !

I found a typo...but someone already did. I thought of linking to a tuberculosis entry...but there isn't one.

I give up - it's great smiley - cheers !

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Berek - A619049 William Wallace - Braveheart and Scottish Patriot :o)

Hi, Fb!
I enjoyed this very much - You might like to link to the edited entry for Edinburgh, and I think 'I travel for travel's sake. The great affair...' should be on two lines, not one.

Good work though! smiley - ok


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Post 8

frenchbean

Typo done, Stu smiley - ok

I've added a footnote about the source of the poem, Pinn. Thanks for that.

Woodpigeon - I'm not sure about that wording. What I wrote sounds better to me smiley - erm Anybody else got a view on that one? smiley - erm

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Post 9

frenchbean

Hi Berek smiley - smiley

Link to Edinburgh entry done smiley - ok

The two sentences in one line are like that because it's not a poem, but prose.

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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Another fantastic entry Fb, you just keep cranking them out smiley - ok

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I believe 'Young Folks' should be in italics.

"To this day, the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood"
Whose childhood? Not mine - I never read any RLS books as a child... or ever I think. I think I had to read Kidnapped at school...

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Post 11

JulesK

"To this day, the characters of Jim Hawkins, Captain Flint and Long John Silver are a part of childhood"

I guess Gosho has a point, Fb, I've never read anything by RLS either. Obviously heard of him and of Treasure Island, but only in passing, as it were.

Maybe it could read '...are a part of many people's childhood'?

Or maybe not!

Julessmiley - smiley


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Post 12

Z

Yes you could say that though I have to admit that I read it sevearl times. Even if you didn't read it yourself wasn't this the orginal 'pirate' story, influcencing many other childhood favourites?


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Z

Ooh I should add that I loved the entry! smiley - biggrin I have to say that Robert Louis Stevenson must be one of my favourite authors, and 'From a Railway Carriage Window' from the Child's Garden of Verse is still my favourite poem, Ooh apart from 'The Night Mail'.


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Post 14

frenchbean

Woodpigeon - I've changed the childhood bit. Thanks for commenting on that, Gosho et al smiley - ok Does it make better sense now?

Thank you for the comments, however pedantic smiley - winkeye It's good to know that peerers really do peer smiley - laugh


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JulesK

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Post 16

J

1894,aged --> 1894, aged

Nice one smiley - ok

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Post 17

frenchbean

Thank you smiley - blacksheep

I have a picture of you there with your fine toothcombe, raking through entries, looking for typos and punctuation mistakes smiley - laughsmiley - laugh

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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Hey, I'm the one who does that smiley - cross

Ok, so my comb has a few teeth missing smiley - blush - when you don't have any hair you don't notice that sort of thing smiley - laugh


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Post 19

J

Yes, but fluffy sheep are so much cuter than mean ol' goshos.

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Post 20

frenchbean

Now, now boys... no fighting smiley - laugh

So, am I done here?

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