A Conversation for Louise Brooks: Actress and Writer
Writing Workshop: A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks
Blackberry Cat , if one wishes to remain an individual in the midst of the teeming multitudes, one must make oneself grotesque Started conversation May 8, 2004
Entry: The Life and Works of Louise Brooks - A2611900
Author: Blackberry Cat, FMA, Storys to rede ar delitabill, Suppos that they be nocht bot fabill - U516189
ok this, my first guide entry, is just about complete but I'm not especially happy with it
I've got plenty more material but in keeping it down to a reasonable length I've ended up with what reads to me like a very dry, bare bones entry
any suggestions on how to improve it would be much appreciated
A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks
nada Posted May 14, 2004
'lo Blackberry Kitty....
Read the entry, obviously. Think it had some good relevant background information...some things I wasn't yet aware of.
I'm not sure what you could add, but perhaps just the background stuff is good enough, as people can always discuss her and other more interesting things in posts?
Sorry can't be of any real help, for what it's worth, I thought it was good.
Lampie
A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks
Blackberry Cat , if one wishes to remain an individual in the midst of the teeming multitudes, one must make oneself grotesque Posted May 16, 2004
Thanks Lampie
Grateful for the feedback, your opinion is valued
I was wondering if it was worth adding a bit more detail on Pandora's Box as it was her most famous film and perhaps a quote or 2 from her
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