A Conversation for Louise Brooks: Actress and Writer

Writing Workshop: A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks

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Blackberry Cat , if one wishes to remain an individual in the midst of the teeming multitudes, one must make oneself grotesque

Entry: The Life and Works of Louise Brooks - A2611900
Author: Blackberry Cat, FMA, Storys to rede ar delitabill, Suppos that they be nocht bot fabill - U516189

ok this, my first guide entry, is just about complete but I'm not especially happy with it
I've got plenty more material but in keeping it down to a reasonable length I've ended up with what reads to me like a very dry, bare bones entry
any suggestions on how to improve it would be much appreciated


A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks

Post 2

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'lo Blackberry Kitty....
Read the entry, obviously. Think it had some good relevant background information...some things I wasn't yet aware of.
I'm not sure what you could add, but perhaps just the background stuff is good enough, as people can always discuss her and other more interesting things in posts?
Sorry can't be of any real help, for what it's worth, I thought it was good.
Lampiesmiley - smiley


A2611900 - The Life and Works of Louise Brooks

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Blackberry Cat , if one wishes to remain an individual in the midst of the teeming multitudes, one must make oneself grotesque

Thanks Lampie smiley - smiley
Grateful for the feedback, your opinion is valued smiley - ok
I was wondering if it was worth adding a bit more detail on Pandora's Box as it was her most famous film and perhaps a quote or 2 from her


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