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A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
J Posted Jun 27, 2004
Hello 
I barely have time to post this, but here goes nothing.
Your first two posts strike me as an issue of preference of style. So I'm going to ignore them.
The last paragraph will stay, I think. I didn't write the last paragraph. It belongs to a finer writer than I, one who isn't around to defend it. It's not entirely relevant, I admit, but it seems more compelling to me than the rest of the entry. A small price to pay, I'd say.
Once again, I beg patience. I'll get around to Gnomon's corrections as soon as things settle down in real life 
A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jun 27, 2004
LeoAlpha,
What has slavery to do with the Statue of Liberty? Everything!
A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
J Posted Jul 1, 2004
Ok, Gnomon. I've worked through your corrections list It wasn't as bad as I thought it would be.
A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
J Posted Jul 1, 2004
Oh, and thanks for your patience.
A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 1, 2004
I'm still not 100% happy with the sentence about the Colossus of Rhodes. I think it would read better if you dropped the phrase "as it did".
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Smij - Formerly Jimster Posted Jul 5, 2004
And with that, the Statue of Liberty update is accepted. Thanks to everyone for their contributions...
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Number Six Posted Jul 5, 2004
Hats off to all concerned.
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Gnomon - time to move on Posted Jul 5, 2004
Well done, Jodan!
A2611559 - The Statue of Liberty, New York City, New York, USA
J Posted Jul 7, 2004
Thanks to those with the corrections and of course, Bels, who inspired me to make a decent entry out of an inadequate one.
Good to see this over and done with.
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