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Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Oh, yeah, turns out I left out the A in the Anumber.


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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

A very thorough and well-written article. The only comment I'd make is that you describe the inverse relationship between a scorpion's sting size and its potency twice. This seems like you're belabouring the point, which really doesn't need belabouring.


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Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Oh, did I say that twice? Sorry, I rewrote part of the scorpion section, must have missed a bit.


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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

I love it. Frightened stiff, but I love it.

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Mikey


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Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Good. Thank you. If you are scared, you probably don't want me to send a scorpion round to your place...smiley - evilgrin


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RFJS__ - trying to write an unreadable book, finding proofreading tricky

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Gnomon - time to move on

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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman

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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Congrats! smiley - disco

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Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Thank you, thank you smiley - tasmiley - biggrin *bows*


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Mol - on the new tablet

Forgot to add in my Well Done. Well Done.

Mol


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SchrEck Inc.

Hi Hussassan,

I've been given your great entry to subedit, and the result is at A2654714. If you spot anything that needs attention, please drop me a note. smiley - bigeyes

SchrEck Inc.


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Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

A couple of things...

1) Spelling - it should be centimetre, not centimeter.

2) Vinegaroon section, Tarantula?! subsection - Lycosa tarantula: should be tarentula

3) Pseudoscorpion section, Mating subsection - 'strings' has been misspelt as 'stings.'

Finally, there is a little bit I would like to add to the end of the Scorpions section...

Holy Scorpions

The scorpion is one of the few invertebrates to have been worshipped as a god. In ancient Egypt, scorpions were associated with the goddess Isis. This is likely to be because scorpions carry their young around on their backs for so long, and Isis was the archetype of a devoted mother.

Interestingly, Isis was also associated with the star Sirius. Guess which constellation Sirius is in? That's right - Scorpio!


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SchrEck Inc.

Done! smiley - ok

(Centimeters got in because of my spell checker; darn!)


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Post 37

Apollyon - Grammar Fascist

Yeah, that's happened to me as well on occasion.


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