h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Alcatraz Island, San Francisco Bay, California, USA - A2528688
Author: Jodan - RIP... Ronald Reagan. - U201497

I just went to Alcatraz and was inspired to write an entry on it. And we already have one, so that's the story of why it's in Update Forum instead of Peer Review.

I've credited the original author and sub because I used a few facts in their entry I didn't have before. And talked to the author. And proofread it twice (not sure how thoroughly proofread though, I drifted off a few times )

So anyway, I open this to ripping and shredding

Original Entry - A530641

Hey Jodan,

wouldn't have thought that the original entry could be improved, but your new one is definitely better (not just longer ). Thumbs up!

My h2g2 time today is somewhat limited, so I couldn't do a proper proofreading, but I didn't find any nits on first sight.

SchrEck Inc.

Very informative, I especially liked the Escape Attempts section The only thing I could think of is perhaps some references to films about Alcatraz? There's that Sean Connery one and that Clint Eastwood one that come to mind. Just a thought, not essential to the Entry as it's mucho grando anyways
PGHF

SO, how are we doing now? This ready to pop?

I've been meaning to add a section on the films that PGHF suggested. Let me do that now...

Section added
I'm ready. Whether you are or not, is of course, for you to decide.

That's in there now and on the Front Page - great work, Jodan!

Righto. I'll get this out of the forum then