A Conversation for (Update) - Alcatraz Island, San Francisco Bay, California, USA

Update Forum: A2528688 - Alcatraz Island, San Francisco Bay, California, USA

Post 1

J

Entry: Alcatraz Island, San Francisco Bay, California, USA - A2528688
Author: Jodan - RIP... Ronald Reagan. - U201497

I just went to Alcatraz and was inspired to write an entry on it. And we already have one, so that's the story of why it's in Update Forum instead of Peer Review. smiley - smiley

I've credited the original author and sub because I used a few facts in their entry I didn't have before. And talked to the author. And proofread it twice (not sure how thoroughly proofread though, I drifted off a few times smiley - yawn)

So anyway, I open this to ripping and shredding smiley - erm

Original Entry - A530641

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 2

SchrEck Inc.

Hey Jodan,

wouldn't have thought that the original entry could be improved, but your new one is definitely better (not just longer smiley - evilgrin). Thumbs up!

My h2g2 time today is somewhat limited, so I couldn't do a proper proofreading, but I didn't find any nits on first sight. smiley - ok

SchrEck Inc.


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Post 3

U168592

Very informative, I especially liked the Escape Attempts section smiley - smiley The only thing I could think of is perhaps some references to films about Alcatraz? There's that Sean Connery one and that Clint Eastwood one that come to mind. Just a thought, not essential to the Entry as it's mucho grando anyways smiley - winkeye
PGHF
smiley - devil


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Post 4

Smij - Formerly Jimster

SO, how are we doing now? This ready to pop?


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Post 5

J

smiley - bleep
I've been meaning to add a section on the films that PGHF suggested. Let me do that now...
smiley - run

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 6

J

Section added smiley - smiley
I'm ready. Whether you are or not, is of course, for you to decide.

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 7

Smij - Formerly Jimster

That's in there now and on the Front Page - great work, Jodan!


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Post 8

J

Righto. I'll get this out of the forum then smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


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