A Conversation for Tower Bridge, London - UPDATE A559

A2509256 - Tower Bridge, London - UPDATE A559

Post 21

Mina

Apostrophe added. smiley - ok

Number Six, if you're happy to meet to compare the view, I have possibly this Sunday, or the Sunday of the meet weekend (11th July), and that's it until August, which is why I said I didn't have much time. I don't really want this hanging around in Peer Review for another two months. Could you make either of those?


A2509256 - Tower Bridge, London - UPDATE A559

Post 22

Mina

In the meantime, I think this entry is ready...


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Post 23

Number Six

In that case, I can do this Sunday? I'm working late shifts over the weekend of the meet smiley - sadface

smiley - mod


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Post 24

Gnomon - time to move on

I still feel that the sentence about boats changing from sail to steam is unclear. I think what you mean is that boats were becoming faster, so the bridge did not need to stay open for as long.

Some more typos, hopefully the last:

directly in the city, there was no need --> directly in the city; there was no need
distibuted --> distributed
in the wharves --> at the wharves
vesels --> vessels
In practise --> In practice
because in an area --> because, in an area
30th June, 1884 --> 30 June, 1884
to the bride --> to the bridge

smiley - smiley


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Post 25

Mina

I've done the typos - clearly my spell checker is missing. smiley - blush Thanks Gnomon.

Number 6, I didn't get back in time from my night out on Saturday to be able to come out to play, sorry! And I'm not going to have time now to make it until August.

I don't want this hanging around for another 4/5 weeks in Peer Review, so as the info about the best views is on the bottom of the entry that this will be pasted into, I'm going to say that I'm considering this finished and ready for the EG. The threads will be there for anyone who wants to have a look.

I have checked this with the Eds, and they say it's ok, I don't need to add them. So I'm just waiting for a passing Scout, unless anyone else has any comments.

smiley - ta


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Post 26

Number Six

Well, in that case, I would pick it - but I seem to have mislaid my badge a week too early smiley - winkeye

smiley - mod


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Post 27

Mina

Damn, bad timing! I was trying to hang on until I could add this, but it's not looking realistic I'm afraid.


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Post 28

Mina

*Looks idly around for a Scout with a spare pick*

smiley - whistle


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Post 29

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Post 30

Mina

ooh thank you! smiley - biggrin


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Post 31

GreyDesk

* doffs cap *

Happy to oblige smiley - smiley


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Post 32

Gnomon - time to move on

Well done, Mina! smiley - bubbly


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Post 33

Mina

Thank you both!


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