h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi, the Cheese!
Since you submitted your article for officious reviewing, I read it and would like to say something about it:
I've personally had some of the best fun throwing snowballs around. But after five minutes of frantic dogfights, I realize my hands freeze to the snowballs. Woolly gloves don't really help, since they get wet and mess up your perfectly globular projectiles.
What I'm getting around to is, could you supply some more info, like, what places are best suited to snowball fights, what kind of snow fortifications can you build (perhaps a crash course in iglo architecture?), how do you prevent premature death by ice, and whatever happened to the sleigh?
And what about the prehistoric snow fights? Is there evidence in the form of fossilized snowballs?
Now I'm just kidding around a bit. I quite like the article, and maybe you could add something about other teamgames to really make it a must-read!
In the mean-time I hope to throw some cold ones around with you one day(perhaps we could set up a game like this in a forum, eg. throw fishies at a certain person, and if he pops up in the replies next, he's hit! hmmm..), and good luck!
Chris.

Thanks for the suggestions ! I improved and sectioned it!

So you did! It's quite cool now, and I'll recommend it to any hiberophile I may pass..
Good luck!
Chris

Nice article

One the proof reading side, you may wish to change the bit say "everyman for hisself" to be less gender specific, perhaps something like "everyone for themselves" or "everyone for his/herself"

Just a thought.

Did I say nice article?