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PaulEvans Started conversation Apr 5, 2004
Entry: The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party - A2489853
Author: PaulEvans - U684918
This is a look at a fascinating subject, an extremely influential family who have had a big impact on 20th Century English history. I think it is ready for Peer Review.
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
SchrEck Inc. Posted Apr 7, 2004
Hi Paul,
nice entry, I don't see any problems with it going into the Edited Guide. 
One small point, though, you should re-phrase "and I would heartily recommend ‘Lantern Slides’, ..." in the third paragraph, as first-person references are frowned upon in the EG. Could be something like "'Lantern Slides', ... are heartily recommended."
SchrEck Inc.
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Apr 7, 2004
Another excellent entry Paul It comes close in some parts to being an opinion piece I think, in that it lavishes much praise on the Bonham-Carters, but not to such an extent that it needs a re-write to get it into the EG, and the final paragraph pulls the entry back into focus.
I wonder how many people around the world (around the UK even) would be familiar with the notion of 'Hampstead intellectualism' though...
Well done
Scout
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
PaulEvans Posted Apr 8, 2004
Thanks for the comments guys, I will give it a bit of editing to try and make it a bit more tight and too the point. 
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
GreyDesk Posted Jul 6, 2004
So how is the editing and tightening up coming along then?
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
Geggs Posted Aug 7, 2004
Presumably a bit stalled, given the author's continued absence.
Worth a move to FM though, I think.
Geggs
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Aug 7, 2004
Definitely
A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
GreyDesk Posted Aug 7, 2004
"Ho Yus", I believe is the phrase.
Now where did I leave that list... 
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Peer Review: A2489853 - The Bonham-Carter family and the Liberal Party
- 1: PaulEvans (Apr 5, 2004)
- 2: SchrEck Inc. (Apr 7, 2004)
- 3: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Apr 7, 2004)
- 4: PaulEvans (Apr 8, 2004)
- 5: GreyDesk (Jul 6, 2004)
- 6: Geggs (Aug 7, 2004)
- 7: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Aug 7, 2004)
- 8: GreyDesk (Aug 7, 2004)
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