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Lady Chattingly Started conversation Jun 3, 2007
Good job, Broe. Don't let this be your last effort. You paint a good word picture. 
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broelan Posted Jun 6, 2007
Thanks, Lady C!
It still needs some work, but I'm encouraged by the feedback I've gotten 
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minorvogonpoet Posted Jul 10, 2007
This is great now - sympathetic characters, amusing and realistic intervention by the dog, an end that is upbeat without being cloying. 
One question - is the note in the last paragraph on the chocolates or the door?
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