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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A22709919 - Slug Bug
Inveictor Started conversation May 30, 2008
Entry: Slug Bug - A22709919
Author: spyderalien - U8366224
Yeah, I'm not sure exactly where to send this... I'm new at writing and stuff (well, actually I did it a long while ago and just picked up again). This is my basic idea, but I'd like some help to get it going.
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Secretly Not Here Any More Posted May 30, 2008
We used to play "Punch buggy yellow" a bit, but then we realised there aren't many yellow bugs on the road - so we just punched each other when we saw a yellow car. But you've not submitted this to hear my boring anecdotes 
Anyway, for a first entry, this is great. There's a few stylistic changes you'll need to make before you can put it in Peer Review, and there's a few US spellings that need to be changed too. I'll give you a full and frank review when I have twenty minutes or so spare.
Great work!
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Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups Posted May 30, 2008
right: If you want to work on this with people then you can collaborate and use that forum or alternatively if you would like a little guidance and still keep it your entry then I suggest this is the right forum. There's certainly plenty here already to suggest it should be in this forum.
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U168592 Posted Nov 26, 2008
Nearly six months the author has posted, propose a move to the Flea Market for this Entry 
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