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Entry: Yorkshire's Castles: York Castle - A2256905
Author: Bluebottle - Currently considering organising an Isle of Wight Festival meet-up... - U43530

An article on the castle itself that's in the heart of Yorkshire's capital - York, North Yorkshire - and is part of a series of articles about Yorkshire's castles.

(The walls of York will be the subject of a seperate article, and as they are city walls and not a castle, are not dealt with here.)

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I stand in awe.

I've only had a brief look at two entries in the series, but I stand in awe.

I'm afraid I'll not have time to look in detail as I've put eleven entries of my own into PR in the last few days and I find myself a little busy with responding to the various threads.

I stand in awe.

and yet . . .

This doesn't quite make sense: 'By far the most impressive and accessible part of York Castle is the clover- leaf keep is now known as Clifford's Tower.'

seems like it is a relative pronoun is missing.

That is now a sentance that I think that I have solved, that is.

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Excellent -

I'm glad you liked it.

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