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Entry: Sweeney Todd - Coiffeur de Démon - A22349342
Author: SWL™ No one can make you feel inferior without your consent. - U1775547

Not so much an update for an existing Entry, but a totally different take on the story.

Oh, that tune!

Any relation to Lloyd? Just curious.

Icy

Bloody great entry! Only one comment - I don't think you should mention a brand name at the bottom of the entry. Boring I know, but someone'll object and your entry could be hidden all over the bank holiday weekend.

I agree, I'd replace it with 'burger' and have the argument later.

Thank goodness it's fish and chips tonight.
Excellent piece, enjoyable and informative, well done.

Brand name removed

Good stuff - worth a place in the Edited Guide for the title alone...

B

Just one thing - curly MS Word apostrophes!

Well written and grippping!

has it's roots --> has its roots
Fourteenth Century --> 14th Century
his clients throats --> his clients' throats

Good stuff!

(the writing not the pies)

Jules

That's the best ending to any entry I've seen in a long time.

Aw shucks

Fascinating entry, SWL, well done. I must admit that I've never heard of Georg Grossman, but Fritz Harmann is known as the most infamous serial killer of the 20th century with as many as 24 killed boys and young men between 1918 and 1924, selling their flesh to a butcher's; and there is a ditty we used to sing as children, saying something along thje lines of:

Just wait for a little while and then Harmann will come to you, too. With his little axe, he'll make mince meat out of you. He'll make aspic from your eyes, he'll make bacon from your bum, he'll make sausages from your bowels and he'll dispose of the rest.
Sorry for the link, couldn't find another suitable one:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fritz_Haarmann

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Well Done, SWL


lil xx

Yaay, well done SWL

Hold on I want to include B'Els bit. How can I possibly leave out making bacon from bums?

Best to get in touch with the sub-ed then once it is with one. What you could do now, is to include it the way you think it should be and point the sub-ed to the relevant part afterwards(either in this thread or in their PS), so that they can alter their version accordingly. I think.

I've just changed it. Hopefully in time, but I'll keep an eye on it. Thanks B'El