h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Some suggestions:

There are two things that I think can be improved upon in the article.

1). Objectivity. This is the hardest part about writing articles. How to say something, without saying anything? How do you add useful information, and not add your opinion? Isn't your opinion useful?

No article is going to be 100% objective, but instead of saying the author is cool, explain why he is popular. Go into more detail on why people enjoy reading his work. Currently you have listed Sex, Graphic Detail, and Funny.

2). HTML. Utilize some HTML and GuideML into your work. Put headers in header tags. If you want a list, utilize list tags. It's really pretty simple stuff, but makes your article look much more professional.

1. Objectivity is one of my worst problems. A lot of my schoolwork (yeh I'm only a teenager yeh) is plagued with this sort of thing. I'll go through the entry soon and see what I can do.

2. I try not to use HTML as it takes up a lot of space on the editing screen, and I only use GUide ML when I need to. Like when I feel a picture's handy (though I've had a moral dilemma with this and bandwidth stealing), or when the entry is so big it needs a header or two. If the entry needs a subheader after I've done it over, then I'll put it in.

Thanks for your effort with this.

OK, what do you think of it now?