h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: THE LAST MISSION OF,(R.A.F).,B24-LIBERATOR, NUMBER-EW.277, - A2228113
Author: JIMCRACKER,7-[BACK ON TRACK AGAIN] - U210898

A2228113

Hi

Have you read the Writing-Guidelines?

If you want this to get into the Edited Guide, you'll have to make quite a lot of changes. The title doesn't have to be in capitals. You're not allowed to use first person references (me, I) and the entry might benefit from a little more information, what it's about, that sort of thing, and fewer lists.

Niwt

thanks for your imput,
i was asked to see what reveiw would be forthcoming,
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the story is all there,it took 6 months to get all the info, its not just a story, its made it posible for the cwgc to update the records, all 5 where listed in st avoid not choloy and ive contacted 3 of the five and let them know they are not in germany or st avoid.
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the planes 12 in total below are the rest of the plane from the liberators,
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as i said it wasnt my idea to reveiw the guide, it was for the ww2, where it is now jim

You don't have to leave it in Peer Review if you don't want to. You can always remove it. Go to PeerReview and find this on the list, click the "X" or "remove" next to it. That way it'll still be available for everyone to see, including on WW2, but you won't need to make changes.

If you were to leave it in Peer Review, it would not take much amendment to fall within the Writing-Guidelines. Just to put the entry into the third person.

Having skim-read the entry, it's not clear to me what happened on that mission and I think that anyone reading the entry would really like to know that. Do you have more details on the actual mission and what happened, Jimcracker?

i would like to take my guide entry off the reveiw, but i cant find where im suppose to do it, i read all the pages followed the links and still cant find the ruddy thing

If you go to the PeerReview Page and look for your entry towards the bottom of the page, you'll see that to the right of the User ID, on your entry, they'll be a small cross, (or if you're not using Brunel it might be the word "Remove"), click on the cross/remove link and it'll automatically move this conversation out of PR and back to underneath the entry itself.

Hope that helps