A Conversation for The Tail of In and Out - shortened version.

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LL Waz

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Neat.


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Post 2

myk

Is outstanding or incredible


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GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

Its even better spoken - the trick is not to try to memorise it, but to just remember who is in and who is out then you are ready for the longer version with in and out doing just that several times. GA


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fluffykerfuffle

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long version... aha... so do you have a long version posted somewhere here or is that just up to us ? smiley - spacesmiley - biggrin


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GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

No, the long version is just prolonging the ending by having them miss each other more and going in and out with conversation with mother.


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Post 6

fluffykerfuffle

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aha!! okay!! (goes into psychobabbler mode) smiley - bigeyes


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GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

The gender is not important so ignore sibling rivalry, unhealthy envy and any complex you care to identify with, not to mention OCD and transactional analysis. That should cover it.


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Post 8

fluffykerfuffle

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and birth order is not applicable either since skunks have litters smiley - cdoublesmiley - cdoublesmiley - cdoublesmiley - cdouble


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GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

There yuh go!smiley - magic


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Post 10

Ugi - Keeper of typos & spelling errers - MAT (see A575912)

Very good.

I think there is one minor typo, however:

Should "So In went Out to find Out" be "So In went out to find Out"?

Ugi


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GrumpyAlembic {Keeper of 143, comfort zones and vacillations }

Thank you, yes I have corrected and the other one that no one else had noticed.smiley - ermsmiley - cheers


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