A Conversation for Reasons to Become a Vegetarian
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Shamrock Started conversation Dec 3, 2003
Overall I enjoyed it, however i have a few suggestios for improvement:
1) You focus on two main arguments, First that it helps the environment (& economically too) and second that it improves your health. I think you should expand upon the envionment argument and give some predictions for the future. For example, if everyone ate meat 4 times a week, how that would soon lead to exstinction of many animals. I don't know... just add some more anaylsis of how it benifits the world.
2) Maybe you should recomend how to eat properly if you are Vegetarian. For example, how to make sure you get enough iron and other viatmins. Perhaps, a few recipies or descriptions of alternative eating could be helpful to readers. Like how to make a good vegetable cocktail? I don't know... maybe I'm asking for too much.
3) Your article is on Vegetarians, however you go into semi-detail about Vegans. I understand how your showing extremes, however I think you should show some other food habits if you are going to talk about Vegans...
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pocket jeesus Posted Dec 4, 2003
I want to thank you for all your help. Everything you said is worth changing in my entry. thanx! 
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Shamrock Posted Dec 4, 2003
No prob... I thougth your article was wonderful... my suggestions were for on things that could make in go more in depth.
Excellent job though!
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