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The Rogue aka Phoniex Started conversation Nov 23, 2003
It needs puntuation cos i copied it outa Word but can you tell me what you think
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Stealth "Jack" Azathoth Posted Nov 23, 2003
Spelling, grammar, structure and language all need some thought and work... I would rethink the begining a little... rephrase it but it's not that bad really... it does get better and more involving as you go on... 
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The Rogue aka Phoniex Posted Nov 23, 2003
I wrote it when i was 10. I wanted help to redo it.
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Stealth "Jack" Azathoth Posted Nov 23, 2003
What kind of help? I'll do what I can...
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Stealth "Jack" Azathoth Posted Nov 23, 2003
Well I haven't the time to help you out now, but if no-one else beats me to I'll can sort that for you... If you want a quick sort though there's askh2g2 or maybe Em.
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Stealth "Jack" Azathoth Posted Nov 23, 2003
<./>askh2g2</.> is where you can go to have lively converstaion and debate but you could go there and ask for some help with your entry...
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Stealth "Jack" Azathoth Posted Dec 1, 2003
Have you looked at this thread? F1693829?thread=350057
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