A Conversation for Children's Treehouses

A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 21

U168592

All agreed and done, thanks once again Rudy smiley - ok


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 22

U168592

Climb up! Make sure you pull the rope in after you though...

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A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 23

Rudest Elf


smiley - ok Except that I forgot one:

Construction Materials 2nd para 3rd line:

(You could also try asking/scrounging for offcuts at a furniture factory, but don't expect the staff to take too kindly)? Just a thought...

This is a charming Entry and deserves to be picked promptly.

smiley - reindeer


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 24

U168592

Thanks smiley - reindeer, I've changed it a bit - a mix of both ideas I think smiley - smiley

I think it's ripe, or atleast them apples are smiley - winkeye


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 25

Rudest Elf



I like the blend smiley - applause , but hold your smiley - reindeer for a second, 'cos I'm not sure that "Unless" is entirely appropriate in the context - it tends to exclude, whereas "also" (or similar) introduces an additional (source of wood, in this case)...

I wouldn't lose any sleep over it, though.

smiley - reindeer


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Post 26

U168592

smiley - zzz

smiley - huh

Oh, there we go.

smiley - yawn

smiley - zzz


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 27

Rudest Elf


smiley - applause What a player!

smiley - reindeer


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 28

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Shouldn't the title be Childrens' Treehouses?

Oh well, I'll let the sub sort thatsmiley - ok

smiley - whistle


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 29

Rudest Elf



Isn't 'children' plural enough for you, GB? smiley - biggrin

smiley - reindeer


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 30

aka Bel - A87832164

GB is talking about the possessive form, and I think she's right. But the sub will know. smiley - ok


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Post 31

aka Bel - A87832164

On second thought, you're right, Rudi smiley - laugh


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Post 32

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - run


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Post 33

Rudest Elf


smiley - biggrin


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Post 34

U168592

Hmm, perhaps I was right all along! heaven forbid I actually know how to write smiley - laugh


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Post 35

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Sorry, Matt.smiley - blush


A20180369 - Children's Treehouses

Post 36

U168592

Ah, I'm just being silly. My writing is far from perfect smiley - smiley


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Post 38

Elentari

Congratulations, Matt! smiley - smiley


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Post 39

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - cheerswell done Matt, great rescuesmiley - applause


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Post 40

aka Bel - A87832164

smiley - bubbly


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