A Conversation for Independent Samoa: Its Culture and Atmosphere

Peer Review: A1936361 - Independent Samoa: It's Culture and Atmosphere

Post 1

frenchbean

Entry: Independent Samoa: It's Culture and Atmosphere - A1936361
Author: Frenchbean - the picky vegetable - U236943

Here it is! The long awaited Samoa entry. smiley - biggrin

I've been struggling with the atmosphere - to get the feeling of being there in the words. Did it work? smiley - grovel

Please peer and comment.

smiley - cheers
F/b


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Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Wonderful entry, F/b. If I had the money, I'd pack my bags and go visit!

Did you say what 'pandanas' were? Or did I miss that bit?

Also 'lavalava' - what's that?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 3

Cyzaki

"Independent Samoa: It's Culture and Atmosphere" - am I going to have to send bob the angry flower after you for misuse of an apostrophe? It should be 'its' not 'it's'.

smiley - panda


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Post 4

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I didn't spot that! As a Virgo, I'm normally the first to spot such things. Still, the entry made me want to go there, if only to listen to the singing.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 5

Florida Sailor All is well with the world

Excellent read. smiley - applause

The only thing I would like to see is a small mention where you mention Independent Samoa was formerly known as Western Samoa would be a mention that American Samoa lies to the east.

Many people ( particularly in the US ) have only heard about the territory part and I kept hoping the difference would be mentioned so I could just enjoy the rest.

I also agree with ZSF that some definition of 'pandas' would help.

F smiley - shark S


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Post 6

Wildman - I'm not really mad, I've just been in a very bad mood for 40 years!

Beautiful article! I want to retire there, right now would be good!

Wildmansmiley - headhurts


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Post 7

Eusebio - squad number 11

A`great article and, as everyone else says, makes me want to pack a rucksack right now smiley - winkeye

One thing, isn't Samoa known as Manu Samoa?


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Post 8

The Professor

The title should be 'Its Culture and Atmosphere'

The apostrophe makes it a contraction as opposed to possessive (It's vs. Its)

The Professor
Societas Eruditorum


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Post 9

Cyzaki

Is there an echo in here? smiley - tongueout

smiley - panda


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Post 10

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Let us know when you've made the amendments, F/b. You've got some great feedback here. smiley - smiley

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 11

frenchbean

smiley - yikes
I submitted this, went to bed smiley - sleepy, woke up this morning and found this plethora of comment. Fantastic! Thank you.

Right:
smiley - blush Apostrophe sorted (I can't believe that this pedant missed that one). Sorry, smiley - grovel Cyzaki.

Lavalavas are explained in a footnote, ZSF - they're sarongs

I'll get back to you on a good definition of pandanas - they're long leaves (like flax to look at) which are harvested, dried, pounded in sea water, dried again, then shredded longways and made into amazingly complicated and delicate mats, walls etc. I need to do better than that explaination in the entry I think!

I've added a bit about American Samoa - thank you for pointing that out Florida Sailor. The original draft of this entry included a huge section on the history of the Samoas and why there are now 2 distinct nations. Perhaps the subject of a separate entry. Would that be of any interest to anybody?

Mickey T's Rt. Foot - I've never heard of Manu Samoa. Can you give me any more information on that?

smiley - cheers
F/b


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Post 12

frenchbean

Hey F smiley - shark S

I'm pretty sure there are no pandas in Samoa

smiley - laugh

F/b


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Post 13

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

smiley - laugh You *know* what he means, F.b. smiley - winkeye

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 14

frenchbean

Hello all smiley - smiley

I've added a lengthy (too lengthy? smiley - erm) footnote about pandanus - and discovered I was spelling it wrong smiley - blush at the same time.

I'm glad you picked up on the singing ZSF. It really is stunning. You don't need to go to Samoa for it either - Tonga, the Cooks, even Auckland (the biggest Polynesian city in the world) all have fabulous choirs. There's something about joined voices in the sunshine...

smiley - cheers
F/b


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Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I'll go and look at the amendments, F/b. smiley - run

Have you heard David Fanshawe's 'Musical Mariner' album, btw. It was recorded in the South Pacific and there's some really lovely stuff in there. There was a TV mini-series showing the making of it - he's a musicologist and was making field recordings. Great stuff!

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 16

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Yes, much better now, F/b.

Btw, 'Kirikiti' has echoes of h2g2's krikkit. Have you read the books?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 17

frenchbean

Hi ZSFsmiley - biggrin

Yes, I did wonder if Krikkit had any links to Kirikiti. Did DNA go to Samoa? It's a wild game. I walked past a group of kids playing on their local patch of grass one day, and got konked on the shoulder by the ball. The bruise smiley - bruisedwas most impressive the next day! The kids just laughed and carried on smiley - laugh They laugh a lot in Samoa - mind you, who wouldn't, living there?

smiley - cheers
F/b

I'll look out for David Fanshawe's music. It sounds good. smiley - smiley


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Post 18

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

I've no idea whether DNA ever went to Samoa. Wouldn't surprise me if he did.

David Fanshawe also composed 'African Sanctus', which is one of my favourite things to sing in - it's also good to listen to. I think the 'Musical Mariner' album came out in the late 80s.

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 19

Eusebio - squad number 11

RE: Manu Samoa

I have done some research and found that it's just the rugby team which calls itself Manu Samoa

FROM BBC Online
"Coach [Bryan] Williams was instrumental in the change of name from Western Samoa to Manu Samoa.

It is the name of a famous Samoan chief some 10 generations ago.

The nickname, like the All Blacks or Wallabies, has been adopted by the national team."


smiley - smiley


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Post 20

frenchbean


Thank you MT'sRF: smiley - smiley do you think I should refer to that in the text? I don't actually talk about the national team, so I'm not sure about it.

I was surprised not to find an edited entry on rugby. There's a gap for somebody to fill - not me smiley - runsmiley - whistle

I'm going to look up Musical Mariner in Amazon right now ZSF. How lovely to have Samoa in my sitting room!

smiley - cheers
F/b


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