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Entry: Halloween 4: The Return Of Michael Myers - A1905734
Author: Bluebottle: He's Back - And It's About Dinnertime - U43530

This is about the fourth film in the Halloween franchise and features the return of Michael Myers.

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itallics --> italics
"see Michael at every street corner" --> 'see Michael at every street corner'
"typical teen" --> 'typical teen'

See my part three comments on headers I think they apply to all of them, but again, are just my opinion

Okay, a few changes made. What do you think?

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Hi there!

'...when he discovers that Michael was transfered...' - transferred

'...where Rachel discovvers...' - discovers

'...many of the deaths being unneccesary...' - unnecessary

'The drunks themselves are unneccesary...' - unnecessary

Caper Plip

Spelling corrections made.

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Need I say it?

A few details to fill in the blank cells would make me much happier with this entry.

Otherwise, this is a fine review of the film.


- Jimi X

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