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Still_WRD Started conversation Nov 27, 2006
I remember this, I always liked it, esp. "But words are heavy and papers weak."
Again, your problem, like mine, is the forced rhymes. Those are the ones where you get to the end of the first line and already know what the end of the next one will be, you know? Other than that, it's mostly spelling errors:
"Streem" Stream
"Though" Through? Or else you need a comma before and after
"To" Too (it's far too lost to get to you)
On a diffent note, I miss you, espscially not seeing you at Cyra's on Sat. I had to go at 6, because my bluebird was raiding with his friends at 6. I MISS YOU!!
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Still_WRD Posted Nov 27, 2006
P.S. "Untitled" My ass! Figure one out! How about "Boat" or "Stream" or "Memories" or "Love Boat" or "Drowned Dreams" or "Not This Time" (which is along the lines of my "Not Yet", which meant, this poem does Not have a title Yet). Silly face
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